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I really wish you'd update! like uber super duper wish you would. I love this story. Please dont abandon it

Oh, God, I am so damn excited to read the next chapter, this was a fantastic chapter. It had so many different things dealt with, and I'm so happy I finally got to read it. Gosh, now excuse me, while I go reading the next one!

Niiiiice! :O
Wow... I'm speechless. I loved it. Aww, and Ken is dead. So sad, I liked him.

This chapter was great!!!! I love Alex it's cool how she's so much like Voldemort, and I'm glad she learned who he was!! How many more chapters til the end??

THAT was a breath-taking chappie! All from start to middle to end.
Hahaha XD Poor Hermione, I can totally understand her fear when he took her in mid air. XD
And then Harry appears. Poor thing, now everyone thinks he's mad. Then again, with such an obsession, I would go as far to say that he probably was kinda mad.
I don't think a childhood like Harry's could have kept anyone that stable any way.

Now THAT is what I call a chapter out of the ordinary. Great! Well done!

LOL Voldemort with a beard... that sounds kinda appealing. Maybe because it's him, cause I find nothing appealing about a beard XD

I feel kinda bad for Alex here. Poor thing doesn't know what's going through her dad's head. O.O Shame on you, Miya, cause we all know that these things reflect what YOU feel XD LOL

Oooh, MERLIN! I LOVE MERLIN! Thank you sooooooooooooo much for including him, even if it's just a portrait. I looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooved it! <3

Looking forward to the next chappie :3

xoxo

Allie

As a most faithful and fast and never forgetfull beta, I must object to my comment regarding Ms Tamsin's characterisation not being taken under consideration. Miya, Miya, Miya, don't you see how OOC Ms Tamsin is? You have her sitting down NEXT to the Dark Lord while we all know she'd have plummeted in his lap, clutched all limbs around him and never would've let go. Just saying. *shakes head*

;)

Anyway, you know how much I loved the last chapter in the cave with all the action.

Loved the creativity of the tunnel digging and the description of going through it, that really souned claustrophobic and scary to me.

Loved how you had Merlin's painting be like an early version of moving paintings and his talk with Hermione.

Loved that Hermione went in and Voldemort got tossed in the water (er... I mean *shakes fist* such insolence! How dare you toss his almighty being in the water and make him lose his wand ... *sticks fist in mouth to muffle upcoming laughter*).

Loved the battle scene. Sure, just snatch her wand, LV, we all know she can't wield it at all. *rolls eyes* I especially liked how violent they both reacted to the other getting hurt and how you got him injured because he was checking up on her.

And then, Hermione having to fly ... it's so her to do it, despite her fears. Plus, I always enjoy an in charge Hermione. XDDD Also, I can't get over the sniggers I had when I read she basically stuck LV to her back like some sticker or backpack. *ROFLMAO at the mental image*

His fears of being put in stasis and thus helpless is so LV - I'm betting he'd preferred to just hang there, in pain, so he could comment on everything she did as they moved out of there.

Anyway, big kudos on your latest update and I'll look forward to the rest,

xx Nerys

WOw! Amazing new chapter! Really loved the action scenes, as well as Hermione getting into Merlin's tomb and Tom getting stuck outside, made me laugh! Can't wait to see his reaction to hermione's copying efforts!

Two reviews from me in one day, missy! Then again, you deserve better. I

After a loooong wait, I finally review the chapter (and lookie! I