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by TheLadyMiya

schedule September 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You had Ron down pat. lol@ Hemrione using Tom's money to buy his gift. The Althea/Hermione scene was really cute. It's always nice to read Hermione acting motherly. I think Althea is my favorite character in this story, not saying that I don't love the others, but you created something wonderful in her. She's a great example of how a child character should be written. Her character leaps off the page.

Thanks for the update.
person Alassea Malfoy
schedule September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*Snorts very unladylike* I found this chapter quite hilarious. I simply love the Parseltongue "chat" Althea and Tom have.

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schedule September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, loved! the characters are so intrigueing ;D
schedule September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I enjoyed the chapter. Can't wait for the next one :)
person Laura
schedule September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wooo!!! I LOVE THIS FIC!!! This story is sooooo good!!! It's so cool that Hermione got pregnant again, and I think you write Voldemort's character so well!! He's still evil but its believable how he cares for Hermione.
schedule September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the Tom and Althea scene. :D

Althea nodded and stood, stretching out her arms so he could wrap the towel around her. Voldemort smiled. She was so trusting. If he played his cards right, she would grow up to be the perfect little minion to him. *smh @ Tom. He is soooo wrong, lol.

Hmm, I would love to know why Ginny's nervous around Tom. I wonder if it has anything to do with his soul sense a part of it did possess her at one point. It's almost as if she can sense who he is without literally knowing the truth.
person Shamonti
schedule September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love!
person IrishPhantom
schedule September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Haha! Voldy wants a big wedding?! Whats he up to? XD Just to let you know that theres two arounds in one sentence, in the part where Hermione gives out to Voldy for his bad language in front of Althea! Loved this chappie! Screw that, I friggen love this story! =D
person Alassea Malfoy
schedule September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AHAHAHA! Oh, he's such a tease! :D
"Oh, and we are keeping the child" - wonderful line to throw after her. xD
LOL
schedule September 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*shakes head while laughing* Now that he's got it in his mind to keep the kid I'm starting to wonder if he'll want to get her pregnant with a few more kids lol...I wonder if this one's a boy or girl hmmmmm..