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She's been raped, she's underage, and it's making her ill, with the healer saying she might die.

ANd you think having an abortion is unreasonable? Shakes head.

What did you mean in saying that Hermione was "one of those people"? That she had considered aborting? That she was someone who had been adopted? That she was someone who was almost aborted? Meh?
By the way, I'm glad you're okay. I didn't know how to get a hold of you besides writing a review, and I was concerned since we hadn't heard anything from you in awhile. I prayed for your health. So I'm glad you're okay.

Well, when you come back, you sure do so with a bang. Sheesh. That chapter was one blow after another, wasn't it? I don't know what more you have planned, but these people need a break. lol Thanks for continuing and I hope the writer's block is over. :-) HG4eva

Wow, I feel awful for Harry. I mean, even Grace is taking it better than he is. And then he gotten beaten and expelled from their lives, too?! Poor Harry. I don't know what else you have planned for them, but I hope they at least have time to heal a bit first. Thanks, luv! HG4eva

Wow. Just Wow. AMAZING!!!!!!! pun intended. It also greatly amuses me that her name is Grace just like mine. Grace Malfoy unfortunately but if I ever find Draco I will change that! ;)

Yay! Addiction is satisied for like... well i need another fix! ;D
cannot wait for the next installment!
Keep up the awesome writing.
Here is some balm for that red hot poker ;)

So I finally got around to reviewing this from reading it start til the last chapter posted. HOLY SHITBALLS. You have really got to lay off the Sundrop and Oreos! J/K girlfren' that is some fantastic ass writing don't you change a thang! From them critters death made to harry being potioned into doing the nasty *gently* with lucius' daughter, you really provide the realism/dark side along with the hero's rescue. *Sigh* I hope the next chappy isn't anti-climatic but I understand it is very difficult to "top" a chapter like this one. It's more of a transitional effort, so take your time with it. From one fanfic writer to another, stay true to what YOU need it to be. Great work chicka. *sigh* Love it.

First of all, I'd like to say that I've read through the entire story in one sitting and am insofar enjoying it, though Lucius is just a little more OOC than my normal tastes dictate.

Second, I'd like to congratulate you on putting a humourous twang in all of the more dramatic parts of your story. It kept me from crying, which is something I'm prone to doing.

Next, I've thought up a question. Do you know approximately how many chapters long this story will be? I'd like to know, because I'm fairly busy and the schedule to which I read is...irregular at best and downright erratic at worst.

In this last chapter, I'd like to add that although not the same kind of dry humor that I'm used to, the bit about the Veil Dementor being high was sufficiently amusing.

Also, I loved the scene in which Death teaches Haine the meaning of retribution. That was particularly satisfying, as I'm sure you intended it to be.

Other than that? Patiently awaiting the next entry.

awesome! love the new chapters, esp jesus comforting tom.

Loved it. Poor Grace. I almost died a little when we thought Sirius was gonna croak. Well, we don't even know for now, but yeah ...
BTW., I'm in my church choir, and every time we do that worship song, it moves me like no other worship song can. It's basically like a hymn, and I think it's going to live on to be one of those classics, you know what i mean, jelly bean?
Thank you for the update!