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for Amazing Grace

by Kooldragon400

person lilashannah
schedule March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You write one hell of a story. I can't wait for more. I love the way you got rid of Ron..I so dislike him.
person Dawn
schedule March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another outstanding chappie, despite no 'real action' yet. Ron's a wanker. Always has been. Always will be. And the boss is a jagoff too. Write more! Can't wait!

Oh! And can I just say that I enjoy your author's notes/post scripts to your chapters/stories almost as much (sometimes more!) than the stories themselves? I literally LoL'ed when I read the latest one. Good to know, Luscious Lucius just foregoes the underbritches. Easier access! *waggles eyebrows suggestively* And, some of us would PAY to get a quick slap on the ass from that yummy pile o'DeathEater-y goodness! Quit pouting! :-P
person Dawn
schedule March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm already in love with this story, can't wait for more. LOL at your end notes!
person amy skydancer
schedule March 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
grins..... and hands over a big bag of P.B.U.N.S. (Plot Bunny Uber Nutritious Snacks( silent "P") to help with a great story! i actually jumped when Hermione and Malfoy collided! Your doing fabulous!
person colao
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved their banter...this should be very interesting...
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Here's some carrots for the bunnies and chocolates for you! Giggling madly. I love Grace!! She's the perfect foil for Lucius; so much like him that she's bound to annoy the crap out of him. Love it! And, yay for Severus!! You know how much I love him, too. :-) I can't wait to see how you bring Hermione and Lucius into each other's worlds. Living with Grace, he's going to need some "tension relief" very soon. *insert wink and dirty laugh here* Hugs to you, dear! HG4eva

person Dawn
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh sweetie.. I like that Grace. She's got moxie! lol Poor Lucius won't know what hit him and I see some spectacular battles ahead! ^_^ Plus, snarky!sarcastic!Snape! My favorite Potions flavor! ^_~ Love it. Keep writing hon. Keep writing!
person Laur
schedule February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome beginning...I can't wait to see where this is going. Does the American fall in love with Harry and that brings Lucius and Hermione together? Or does Malfoy try to go retrieve his paper from Hermione and then sparks fly? Oh...I can't take the suspense!
person Dawn
schedule February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Poor Harry!! :( And, though you aren't anti-Weasley necessarily, you sure do set it up to be annoyed with/hate Ginny and Ron. Which is no biggie. They annoy me too. In the books and films, not just fanon.

But seriously, this is such a fresh-feeling plot set-up so far. Granted, some aspects of these two chappies have been done in fic before, but your take is new, at least so far. I'm looking forward to more more more.
schedule February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love it and can't wait to see what's next. See I did it! I fed the plot bunnies!
So is it the Chili Peppers Rollercoaster or the original?