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for Amazing Grace

by Kooldragon400

person Jennifer
schedule March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story tonight, and as much as I loved reading Riverbend, this one is going to be just as good as that one. Hopefully no reappearing Voldemort in this one...
person Drea
schedule March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. Seems a little similar to riverbend, relative needs tutor Hermione needs job. Can't wait to see the differences. And if Lucius' daughter ends up with Harry Hehe. Hopefully the bunnies get full and we get a new chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter
person lilas_hannah
schedule March 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story..I can't wait for more.
I wonder what will happen when Luc finds out what was done to his girl..
Sounds like she's starting to get a crush on Harry. Oh what fun.
And who can blame Hermion? He is HOT!!
schedule March 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm fairly certain that I love you, and that I want to have like...10,000 of your babies. Amazing story! Amazing characterizations! I love the little chats in the beginning and the end of the chapters, and naughty Lucius is. Do you think maybe I could have a smack too? I do love having my ass slapped. I love the plot of the story. I love how Harry is in a wheelchair and is trying to cope after the war. I like how Harry and Hermione take care of each other, and I'm glad she got rid of that ginger with half a brain. I always disagreed with that pairing. Ron is too stupid for Hermione. She would want to blow her brains out if she ever married the guy. I don't claim to be a genius, but I can't handle talking to a stupid guy, no matter how good looking he is. Anywho...I can't wait to read more of this story! You're a bloody brilliant authoress! Ooh, forgot, I like the daughter, and her drawing Harry was too cute. I can't wait to see how all that develops.

Ero
xoxo
person Dawn
schedule March 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Still lovin' the story. I really like the characterzation you have given Draco. I don't believe I have read him like this before.
schedule March 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
schedule March 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*blinks at the Snape bunny* I'm not even going to bother asking how THAT came about... O_O

Now, I'm the first to acknowledge the beneficial effects of sprightly sex on one's disposition, but... whatever Draco's on, I want a cauldronful of it. Nice folks? NICE FOLKS??? You'll give Lucius a coronary before his time and sex scenes with ghosts are REALLY hard to pull off, you know...

So... are we setting up Potter and Junior, or what?

Loved the humour, but I still expect an explanation for the change in "the dynamics between Draco and Granger" and the lack of explosions at the Manor. Is Lucius THAT clueless when it comes to his child(ren), or is this groundwork for subsequent chapters again?
person Sampdoria
schedule March 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have just found and read this story, and I looooooove it!!! Your Draco is wonderful, I hope you will find a way to help Harry and I do hope that Hermione will get her sexy and smart wizard, though I find it a bit diffecult to completly vote for Lucius at the moment. He migth be a product of his time and generation, and Grace should think before she speaks at times, but I am living in a country where hitting children have been prohibitted by law for several decades, so I am not to fond of his metode of punishment. I like Grace's spunk, I can admit that she can have manners and spunk at the same time, but having the manners beating into her, well that is a completely different game.
That said, I love the story and plot and I am very much looking forward to read more. (And if you in a epilogue let us know that Ron and Lavender get really stupid children, I wouldn't mind:-))
person Dawn
schedule March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I didn't get a chance to review the last chappie before this. I didn't hate it. Somehow I always pictured Lucius from the "spare the rod, spoil the child" school of child-rearing... I just didn't have a chance to get a review up while I was traveling.

Anywho, EXCELLENT newest chappie. OMG. I absolutely <3 <3 <3 your laid-and-laid-back Draco!!!! He's great, and I want more of him and him interacting with (and confusing the hell outta!) Harry and Hermione... and his dad of course! I'm also glad to see H & L in the same zip code for once (so to speak) even if it's too early in the tale for any smexy-smex. ^_^ As usual, can't wait to read more... so hurry up and write, m'dear! Yay!
schedule March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lucius = big baby and belligerent bully (yes, I enjoy alliteration ha ha ha)
Grace = normal, but much-abused teenager, who is trying to find herself and adapt
Hermione = good judge of character and timing (knows when to get out of dodge) lol
Harry = foolhardy, but funny
Draco = funny, friendly, more open, and more nurturing than I would have given him credit for

All in all, I love the characters you've created and look forward to getting to know them better. I hope Draco spends time getting to know his sister, so that we can see him more often. I will keep my fingers crossed that Harry's surgery works and he at some point kicks Lucius' butt; it's always nice to see a bully bullied. I am chomping at the bit to see Hermione put Lucius in his place and allow Grace to start to come into her own. I admit to also wanting to see Lucius grow and mature. I want to love him, too. lol

Thanks, luv! HG4eva