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April 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
although this is a good story, where is hermione/lucius?? i keep waiting for that to show
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April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read more. I love your character development, and the plot is coming along nicely.
Don't make us wait to long!!
Don't make us wait to long!!
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April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Grace... I just want to hold her and hug her until she knows she's not at fault. She doesn't need to change, she just needs to refine her better qualities. I am so glad Draco seems to see that. I can't wait for his choice of "help" arrives (hoping of course it's Hermione). Lucius' unbreakable emotional wall will crumble. tee hee hee Looking forward to more REALLY soon. Thanks, luv! HG4eva
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April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Whoop whoop! Loving this story! Keep up your epic-ness! :D
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April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Give yourself more credit, that chapter was top notch! More importantly its left me aching for more.
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April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Very good chapter, I like the dynamic of the characters. Very well done! Can't wait for more.
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April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. It is a little boring right now since Hermione is (mostly) no where to be seen, I get that you have to have some sort of set-up and background story- otherwise I would just read one-shots!
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April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
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March 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... wasn't there a spell to fix broken noses? Or was it Metamorphmagus-Order-members-only? And am I the only one who finds a mental image of half-naked Draco "grappling for dominance" with his father on a library floor completely OMFGwhatjusthapenedhere-worthy? :P
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March 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Your writing style is very captivating and well polished. The plot line is very entertaining and you've developed the beginning of a wonderful story so far. However, Draco and Harry's extreme OOC definitely made it hard for me to continue reading. I appreciate that you've kept Hermione and Lucius relatively in character, especially since they are the main characters. And I like that you made the distinction for why Lucius is any better than Niel, because at first they definitely seemed a bit too close for Grace's comfort. Nice work.