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loving this story. i was trying to figure out how you were going to throw hermione into the malfoy's orbit. i really like your draco. he has a great personality now. cant wait to see what you are going to do with this story. and grace/harry... hmmm it could work.

you have a great writing style. definitely deserving of praise. *off to read your other stories*

I love your author's comments almost as much as the story itself. I am going out of my mind with excitment at reading the rest of this story! I love Grace, I love the delightful new Draco, and Lucius' attempts to be make amends, and be a good father. I'm glad you got rid of Ron. I was never really fond of him. I always thought JK Rowling was insane for pairing Ron and Hermione together. Poor Harrykins! He's got a long, rough road to recovery. I want to take care of him! *sniffle* Oh Lucius. I'm jealous that you get spanks on the bottom from him. It looks like everything is in place to move forward. I'm wicked excited to read the next update. You are an excellant weaver of HP fiction my dear. Keep it up! I feel like I am watching this as a movie, and I am foaming at the bit for the next part. As I am for the last installment this year. I hope this counts as a wonderfully mushy review cookie for you, and a few carrots for the bunnies.

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I retract my statement about being similar to Riverbend. I enjoy this one very much. Love the update. Poor Grace jus because of a bad attitude, nobody believes her. Neil needs to be hex to oblivion. And Draco and Harry need to hook up...hehehe. Can't wait for the good Lucius and Hermione action.

Wonderful new chapter. I really like how you are bringing to light Grace's problems. Can't wait for the next chapter.

LOL! I laughed really hard at your a/n. Loving the story, I'm glad that Hermione has finally entered the picture to meet Grace. I also like nice(ish) Draco. I mean really, the kids got to grow up sometime right?

I love this story. Thank you!

Hot, nasty SMEX?! LMAO!!! You crack me up. I mean, I hope they do, too, but I've never seen it written quiet that way. ha ha ha And, yes, I think you've set things up very nicely for a lovely chance opportunity for Lucius to finally see how to really relax. ;-) I am so glad Grace got through a chapter without pain finally. She really needs a hug or a thousand. And, I do feel badly for Lucius, too. He keeps trying and screwing up, no matter his intentions. I am glad you've put Hermione in his path to fix that for him. :-) Thanks, luv! HG4eva

poor Gracie :( i hope she recovers from this all. can't wait for the next update.

i love love LOVE this story so far! i can't wait for the next update! sometimes i read stories where lucius is soooo.... un-lucius-like. he's completely out of character and it is super frustrating! but you do such a great job of making believable characters that it just makes me *squee* on the inside :) and i love your comments each chapter. they always make me giggle. your writing style is phenomenal and i know this had been very praise-heavy, but i think it's totally deserved. haha you're too legit to quit! so i hope you keep writing so that i can read more soon. i'm super stoked for the next chapter ^_^