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poor Grace! i do hope that lucius realizes that mistake or better yet that he didn't know she was there. well at least those two are back together! YEAH!!!! :) post the next chapter soon!

I just....I used to just LOVE this story and now I am pissed about how this turned out.
So Lucuis has goes thru a depression (which is clinical) but that his fault?
After Lucuis gets better he go immediately to Hermione? not his daughter or son but Hermione? and Hermione is ok with that?
I mean even to go back a bit, How is an underage Grace allowed to run off with her rapist? Why is that ok? Why does Harry even agree with that, if he felt so bad about raping her? Why is abortion considered the bigger evil than the rape and kidnap(yes harry is kidnapping because again GRACE IS A MINOR). Mind you we are talking about a pregnancy that put the mother at the risk of dying. Hell with all the trauma Grace went through a miscarriage was most likely. And she ran away from Lucuis, the man with power and money to get her the great medical care she needs for herself and the pregnancy to survive. No you decide she miraculously has the kid(2 wtf) without further complications? I just don't get it. You have actually made me HATE Grace. She needs to go to her father and grovel because she was in the wrong. Owling updates of your life like everything is ok and you didn't just abandon your family was fucked up, he was right not to respond. This story took a bad turn into immature.

It was hot! Now Lucius just needs to reconcile with his daughter and meet his grandchildren.

It was hot,
Cheers

Where'd you go? I miss you so... Seems like it's been forever that you've been gone...
But in all seriousness, you're doing a wonderful job and I love it. I check back every other day for updates. Can't wait for more.

oh dear lord. The letters saddened me abit but the ending was hilarious. I'm looking forward for more updates. You're definitely one of my favourite writers on here.

I just read this fic for the first time. It is unique and entertaining. I look forward to reading the next chapter. I hope Lucius gets his act together soon.

I hope there is what Lucius has been doing in there for a bit and I hope that Hermione sees Lucius when you update again that is going to be good

I really liked how you moved time along and provided important details as well...now Lucius needs to pull that beautiful head from his posterior

Great chapter. I was kind of hoping that you would have Hermione move on and end up with Severus, so that she could have a child and be rid of the immature, control freak of a Lucius. Love that Grace and Harry ended up married and that they have added to their family AND that they truly love each other. Looking forward to the next time. p