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for Amazing Grace

by Kooldragon400

person blindfaithoperadiva
schedule May 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Everything's important, eh? So I guess I can't ask questions as they all have to do with what's coming next! Keep it coming, please.
person Anouk
schedule May 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
nice story, really enjoying it... just thought the trip harry made sounded a little like "Dora's adventures"... anxiously awaiting the next chapter... I'm also reading your other story, Just around the riverbend... just at chapter 20 now, I really like it, my compliments...
person Ms.Kaeleene
schedule May 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Was not expecting Severus to find her alive. Poor little Nikki is definitely a mini quater vamp...still cute though. I really hope Harry can convince Sirius to come back. Who's happy you updated....*points thumbs at self* THIS GIRL
person colao
schedule May 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is fun, I look forward to more!
schedule May 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story just gets better and better. I don't usually approve of abuse, but I must say thanks to Lucius for getting your ass in gear. What's a few bruises on your bum when you consider how well this story is turning out. Lucius wins, we readers win, it's a win/win situation. I like that Severus was able to save Nikki's Mom. Maybe the new Headmaster, being a Halfling, can help. Your writing shows depth with the development of other characters. Your interpretation of what a Dementor does is much better and kinder than other stories. I like that they are collectors of souls for Death. Thanks.
person Heather
schedule May 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am a reader of your story Amazing Grace and I thought I would tell you how much I love it (you asked for a paragraph so I will do my best)! I never review so this is a first for me but your story is so worth it. I am not sure what to say other than I look forward to your story everytime you post! I am hoping to hear more about Snape though...I love the way that you are making the relationship between Hermione and Lucious progress they are such a great couple. Your character Grace's personality reminds me of my sister, right down to the terrible language. I love it!
Hopefully you will finish this story, there are too many authors who don't *sigh*. Anyway I am looking forward toy our next post!!!!!
person tira
schedule May 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
unfortunately your snarky dementor isnt up to snapes quality....but it was amusing
person courtn88
schedule May 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOVE THE DEMENTOR...smart a**es always win my vote
person colao
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
thank you for a bit of enjoyment before heading off to work
person Pam Williams
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories, this one is just as exciting as the last, just wish you'd post faster..lol but keeps me coming back for more...keep up the good work...thanks.