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Poor Harry can't win for losing, can he? I hope she at least mentions that she appreciated his efforts and tells him why she didn't really want to leave in the first place. Go, Little Tom with the advice. He cracks me up. And, yes/YAY for Hermione finally taking charge and going for what she wanted. Bless Lucius for being able to provide it! Thank you for the explosiveness I'd been waiting for since the date. :-) Please don't leave us for so long next time, okay? HG4eva

I know exactly how you feel about the review counter. :) And smut is a bit harder to write than everyone thinks it is. You did a lovely job of it. I loved the ending. Hermione tasting his cum was a nice touch. :)

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Smut with Lucius is always enjoyable and you did well!

A wonderful bout of smut!!!! As a fellow writer I understand its difficult to turn out a good scene without making it seem cheesey, and trust me this WAS NOT a cheesey scene. Very HOT!!! Keep up the great work!!!

Re: Chapter 20

DragonFyre,

I love you. Seriously. Love. Because that was simply hot as hell, and absolutely made my day. Love. <3 <3 <3

Chapter 3: Grace is a cheeky little devil, isn

Chapter 4: I can

Chapter 5: Lucius is a very strict parent, but Grace was giving him no real respect so I reluctantly agree that Lucius had to take control or spend his time being talked back to by Grace

This is, as usual, a wonderful chapter and a great story set up. I find myself really liking little Tom... I hope he doesn't end up evil!! And yay for no more Marks on Draco and Lucius! ^_^ Fantastic writing as always, DragonFyre. You manage to weave such believable, likable characters in very complex plots that are far beyond much of what other fics attempt. In fact, each subplot or thread of a DragonFyre plot could stand alone as a "normal person's" fic, but you, my darling DragonFyre are apparently superhuman! Love it and can't wait for more.

PS... Please post the pics and the link to them! Because this is the last film, I too am dressing up this year for the midnight premiere in our area (to my husband's chagrin... but he dressed up for the midnight premieres of the Star Wars flicks so :-P ). I'm going as DH2 Hermione - simple outfit, but the beaded bag and Bellatrix's wand are looking badass! ^_^ 36 hours from now!!!!

I do so love you. And, I admit I was one more day from writing you to see if you were alright. Now, I understand. :-) You aren't alone, my dear. I will be attending the movie as a member of my house (Hufflepuff) with my sister who is a Ravenclaw and a friend who's decided she's going as Bellabitch. Crazy girl. lol I look forward to seeing your crew. :-) This chapter was really well done. Their individual responses were perfect (I can't wait to see Severus' response) and I am VERY glad the marks are gone. Yay, little good-guy-Tom!! I like that Hermione and Lucius have become so comfortable with one another that she could curl up next to him as he told his story, and he could be soothed by her presence. Lovely! Thank you, hon. ENJOY THE MOVIE!!!! HG4eva