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October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful adventure in this chapter! Whwn they were looking for Draco it was totally unpredictable for me. You even know that British people call their subway 'The Tube' ;). You always know what you're writing about, even the technical details and it makes you even better writer. Thank you for sharing your wonderful fic with the other people.
I just need a new chapter. for Merlin's sake update!!!!
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I just need a new chapter. for Merlin's sake update!!!!
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October 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
God, I read the story from the beginning and I must say your English is much better! I think it's just amazing to learn when at the same time you're doing something so NOSEBLEED WORTHY and the other people can enjoy it! Thank you so much!!!! I liked the additions, too. I really, REALLY like the way you write. You use interesting figures of speech and the plot is very exciting. And the last chapter was amazing.Please update soon. I want to know what happens next.
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October 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy harry feels closer to the baby now. so sweet ^.^! I understand he just needed time for it because he wasnt there from the start and only recently found out that he's going to be daddy . You put the emphasis on it in this chapter. It also reminded me of my mom when she was pregnant with my little bro. I was 11 y.o. and I was a little shocked when I clearly saw baby's movements. He was very lively. the chapter's just great. AT first I was a little afraid to read it because of the title. Just imagine what I thought of it after the end of the previous chapter. Phew.......... Im sooo relieved to know that they all survived it. The bitch got what she deserved. Reading about Draco's pain and grief was heartbreaking. you're a queen of describing angst and othe emotions. Love it! sorry for not reviewing sooner. I'm with you from the start until the end )
Your Sentinel.
Your Sentinel.
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October 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Love everything about it! Next please! X
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October 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so I have a lot to say so I am sorry if this ends up being a REALLY long review.
I have been following your story since it was posted. I LOVE IT. The idea is amazing, the plot is incredible, and your ability to keep charters true to their personality is amazing. I often get mad when I read a story and the characters don't develop in a believable way. You, however, do it perfectly. The best I have read so far.
Because of that I have read the chapters avidly for a long time now, over and over again. I literally have read your story 100X more than the original Harry Potter books. You make the authors note to warn people about your "bad" English but I hardly notice it. I have read hundreds of stories where the author is a native English speaker and is WAY worse than you could imagine, much less making the un-noticeable mistakes you make. Your story reads so well that I don't notice them.
I hope your friend who you wrote this for is happy, and enjoys it. They should consider it an honor that such an amazing and well written story has been created for them.
That being said, I noticed the difference in the chapters now that you added and corrected things. I cant point out exactly what changed, and reading it now its not bad, but I do miss the chapters I originally read so many times :-( I still LOVE the story, and your revisions are great. *sigh* I guess I mean it as a compliment that you did so well the first time that I miss it a little bit.
Please keep updating, the new chapter is wonderful. I am so GLAD that Voldemort isn't back and Draco and Harry are safe. I cant wait to read about the baby, I am excited to know what you will have them name him. The baby should have a strong name, the name Nickolai or Micah comes to my mind :-)
Again sorry for the long review, I'm just gushing I suppose. I will be posting a Draco/Harry story myself soon and would love your critique if you would do me the honor. I will message you when I have it posted, if you want to read it! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
Keep up the good work!
~ Sarah
I have been following your story since it was posted. I LOVE IT. The idea is amazing, the plot is incredible, and your ability to keep charters true to their personality is amazing. I often get mad when I read a story and the characters don't develop in a believable way. You, however, do it perfectly. The best I have read so far.
Because of that I have read the chapters avidly for a long time now, over and over again. I literally have read your story 100X more than the original Harry Potter books. You make the authors note to warn people about your "bad" English but I hardly notice it. I have read hundreds of stories where the author is a native English speaker and is WAY worse than you could imagine, much less making the un-noticeable mistakes you make. Your story reads so well that I don't notice them.
I hope your friend who you wrote this for is happy, and enjoys it. They should consider it an honor that such an amazing and well written story has been created for them.
That being said, I noticed the difference in the chapters now that you added and corrected things. I cant point out exactly what changed, and reading it now its not bad, but I do miss the chapters I originally read so many times :-( I still LOVE the story, and your revisions are great. *sigh* I guess I mean it as a compliment that you did so well the first time that I miss it a little bit.
Please keep updating, the new chapter is wonderful. I am so GLAD that Voldemort isn't back and Draco and Harry are safe. I cant wait to read about the baby, I am excited to know what you will have them name him. The baby should have a strong name, the name Nickolai or Micah comes to my mind :-)
Again sorry for the long review, I'm just gushing I suppose. I will be posting a Draco/Harry story myself soon and would love your critique if you would do me the honor. I will message you when I have it posted, if you want to read it! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
Keep up the good work!
~ Sarah
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October 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter, your friend should be proud of you this beautiful story wrote for she,your friendship is so big, strong, I think as humans have the ability to make our own decisions wrong or right I have learned with this story that love is the most important too forgive, forget, and can change your life's.your English is excelente thank you for this day super.
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October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dont leave me like this! I've just spent the whole day reading this! Please! :(
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September 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh please update your story I'm dying to find out what happens next. I love your story so much I've got to know how it ends. Your fan CJB.
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August 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
new chapter is unspeakable.
Im so terribly intrigued. is it true that Volde... *you know who* is back or will be back soon?
and of course I worry about Draco.
Too bad your work is a waste of your tailent. Update!
Im so terribly intrigued. is it true that Volde... *you know who* is back or will be back soon?
and of course I worry about Draco.
Too bad your work is a waste of your tailent. Update!
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August 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was a very exciting chapter as both Harry and Draco was waiting for the baby gives me great pain that Draco is in this situation but I hope you find it soon.
I love history, I sometimes feel sad, happy in this episode I thought it would come the end of history as it is not true that I'll be waiting for good you're doing well I wish you health, wisdom and you'll never miss.
a few days ago I started to read again story in the details the history remember me who, Harry almost rapes a man, this man has the physical aspect of Draco shook me because he knew something was wrong but could not know what was happening .
I know there are different types of love manternal, the brothers, family and the couple but maybe if Giny loved Harry, but her love is selfish. thanks for this history.
I love history, I sometimes feel sad, happy in this episode I thought it would come the end of history as it is not true that I'll be waiting for good you're doing well I wish you health, wisdom and you'll never miss.
a few days ago I started to read again story in the details the history remember me who, Harry almost rapes a man, this man has the physical aspect of Draco shook me because he knew something was wrong but could not know what was happening .
I know there are different types of love manternal, the brothers, family and the couple but maybe if Giny loved Harry, but her love is selfish. thanks for this history.