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February 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gods, what a wonderful story. Definately a favorite angsty, heart warming story. Great job! :D I hope to read more of your work!
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February 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh lovely story! How scary for little Narcissus (sp?) to have seen his Father faint at such a young age. (Seeing my mom fall out of a semi and land on her back at 15 was terrifying, I can only imagine!) I think Ravenclaw is perfect, if one is to combine Harry and Draco, intelligence, individuality, and natural curiosity he'll have in abundance.
I enjoyed this story over all, and even if things went bad for Draco for so long, it was nice to see he still kept his pride and dignity through it all.
I enjoyed this story over all, and even if things went bad for Draco for so long, it was nice to see he still kept his pride and dignity through it all.
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February 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I forget say this history the best.
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February 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
At first I thought it was the second most beautiful history but I can see what your history does in my life,I want say thank you for write this history, my sad,my pain, my hope,my feelings etc,watch what love can does in your life, I was honored to be part of your readers.
atte: Nubia E.Pelaez
vetiggo@hotmail.com
P.D Soy una persona que sabe que sabe que hay un ser supremo llamdo Dios a el le pido que te bendiga y que cuando lo llegues a necesitar te abrace .
atte: Nubia E.Pelaez
vetiggo@hotmail.com
P.D Soy una persona que sabe que sabe que hay un ser supremo llamdo Dios a el le pido que te bendiga y que cuando lo llegues a necesitar te abrace .
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February 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh Thank you so much for such ending!
They are great parents. I love Narcissus so much!
I'm looking forward to read your other stories.
I'm just so IMPRESSED!
They are great parents. I love Narcissus so much!
I'm looking forward to read your other stories.
I'm just so IMPRESSED!
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January 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is the most amazing chapter of the most amazingstory Ive ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I simply have no words to say how much of emotions you've fished out of me. It's simply a marvelous story. I'll send you a bill for all my soiled handkerchiefs. Just kidding ;P.
I'm so happy for them that they have a beautiful baby boy now!!! *Squeels*
It's a very clumsy reviw I know but it's hard for me to describe what I feel right now. please update. You know I'm addicted
I'm so happy for them that they have a beautiful baby boy now!!! *Squeels*
It's a very clumsy reviw I know but it's hard for me to describe what I feel right now. please update. You know I'm addicted
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January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh finally!!!!!! I'm so glad you updated!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm tired of reading stories where Harry is a sub or a wimp. MAKES ME SICK! The world needs more people like you and stories like yours.
And 'Harry weak and completely broken by some events so much that he can not do a thing by himself and throughout the entire story someone's literally dragging him to his victory; and he only wins because of his unique powers without having any strong will. ' you write? Are you serious?!!! God save me from ever finding anything like this. Thank you for not doing THIS to your readers.
Poor Draco had a hard time with the last weeks and then with the birth of his babe =(! But I'm glad we can finally see their sonny ))))))). He's sweet. I liked the love scene and how Harry treats Draco. To me he looks very attentive and capable of taking the edges off in any situation. He's sharp-witted, heedful just as he SHOULD be.
It's the first story I ever read where the process of childbirth looks very right and real not some writer's bizarre fantasies.The world REALLY needs more educated writers like you! The length of your chapters is simply great. Some people's chapters are shorter than your author's note! Argh!!! Sorry for being a bit hateful today, I tried to read a couple of stories but stopped because I strongly disliked them. Then I found your new chapter. Saved my day
And 'Harry weak and completely broken by some events so much that he can not do a thing by himself and throughout the entire story someone's literally dragging him to his victory; and he only wins because of his unique powers without having any strong will. ' you write? Are you serious?!!! God save me from ever finding anything like this. Thank you for not doing THIS to your readers.
Poor Draco had a hard time with the last weeks and then with the birth of his babe =(! But I'm glad we can finally see their sonny ))))))). He's sweet. I liked the love scene and how Harry treats Draco. To me he looks very attentive and capable of taking the edges off in any situation. He's sharp-witted, heedful just as he SHOULD be.
It's the first story I ever read where the process of childbirth looks very right and real not some writer's bizarre fantasies.The world REALLY needs more educated writers like you! The length of your chapters is simply great. Some people's chapters are shorter than your author's note! Argh!!! Sorry for being a bit hateful today, I tried to read a couple of stories but stopped because I strongly disliked them. Then I found your new chapter. Saved my day
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January 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aww!! I'm glad I had some tissues near by! You made Ron so much more mature than most other writers, its quite refreshing. Wonderful job, and there's more? Really?! Oh, I await with baited breath to see what else you have in store. <3 (first time I actually loved a story)
Leania
Leania
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December 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god. This chapter has everything and it's very eventful! At first an exciting adventure and action.
Then Draco's pain has touched me so deep that for a few moments I imagined myself in his place.
Interesting turn with what Harry did to Medea's mind. Even if Harry's not Voldemort's horcrux anymore it seems his magic still has a dark potential. That's what I thought reading about her broken mind.
This Medea had quite a devious ways to get to Harry. She just wanted a humiliating death for him as far as I see it right?
It was awful that Draco thought that his baby died. And he seemed pretty sure that Voldemort returned. It could surely ruin their lives.
I'm glad that Hermione supports them. I remember she wasn't fond of Harry's and Draco's friendship inschool. Glad she's changed her mind.
And finally I liked what Harry did for Draco in the end.
Wonderful work as always.
By the way, I read the story again with all your little changes. and omg... i feel so angry at Ginny again. She even thinks she's done something good.
P.S. Poor Goyle :D
Then Draco's pain has touched me so deep that for a few moments I imagined myself in his place.
Interesting turn with what Harry did to Medea's mind. Even if Harry's not Voldemort's horcrux anymore it seems his magic still has a dark potential. That's what I thought reading about her broken mind.
This Medea had quite a devious ways to get to Harry. She just wanted a humiliating death for him as far as I see it right?
It was awful that Draco thought that his baby died. And he seemed pretty sure that Voldemort returned. It could surely ruin their lives.
I'm glad that Hermione supports them. I remember she wasn't fond of Harry's and Draco's friendship inschool. Glad she's changed her mind.
And finally I liked what Harry did for Draco in the end.
Wonderful work as always.
By the way, I read the story again with all your little changes. and omg... i feel so angry at Ginny again. She even thinks she's done something good.
P.S. Poor Goyle :D
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November 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am delighted with your story. Narcisso es un bello nombre,what is your language, I am Mexican but I need to speak English to communicate with other people like you who have learned this language hope the next chapter with great enthusiasm.
sorry for me horrible writing.
sorry for me horrible writing.