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person Primera
schedule March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
No!!!!!!!!!!! :(((((((((((((( That was a very hard chapter to read. I'm not a person who cries over movies or books but I was crying reading this. When fake Harry said - "We'll just find another place to be together, you and I" -- that was heart-breaking. It's good that Draco destroyed the window. It could drive him crazy. I'm still crying. What a terrible thing to do to someone. wonderful work anyway. You're very good in describing emotions
person helewisetran
schedule March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
noooo, why did Harry have a change of mind lk that? I need to know.
person Jan
schedule March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please update chapter 9 soon ^_^

Jan
person vetigo_74
schedule March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh no poor Draco was happy now that I'm worried about your health,
interesting chapter, and right now I remember ayyyy each month has to go with
Aurors guess what it will torment and will know that the
have sex with Harry.
person Blondsneedlove
schedule March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please update- I want to know what happened with Harry and why Draco worries.
Loved the scene in bed when Draco was telling about sleepy, beautiful, kissable blonds. so flirty =). That's how I always imagined him. even in love not all goodie-goodie but capricious. Brilliant!
what does Draco's password mean?
person SilverLion
schedule March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've got one major criticism: Harry never prepared Draco when they were having sex. That would really hurt Draco, and Harry wouldn't want that. Other than that (and the spelling and grammar) this story is good.
person Viky
schedule March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like it! white rose is so romantic. Please keep continue
person SilverLion
schedule March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Actually, it didn't. I am enjoying this story. I wasn't trying to sound like a jerk or anything. Heck, even I've made mistakes with spelling and grammar (check my stories if you don't believe me). My main problem is finishing what I've started. I'm fine with one-shots, but beyond that.... Anyhoo, please keep up the good work. I hope to see more from you in the future (maybe Cedric/Harry?).
person Primera
schedule March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have so many questions! Who was spying on them? And what's happening to Harry? Could he be....? Oh, no, don't tell me :).
Hehe! I liked the story of the mage from the portrait :D
schedule March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Liking this story a lot! Is Harry the one to end up pregnant? I thought it would be Draco from the go.... hmmm anyway hope you get well soon