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person shyne
schedule March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Before this chapter i was hoping someone's going to notice Draco's condition.
After this chapter i really hope someone's going to notice Harry's condition.

it's amazing what a single chapter can do
person lycantrop
schedule March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 6,7 & 8 are very sensual. Chapter 9 is heartbreaking and chapter 10 is incredibly emotional.
The new chapter is good too. I wondered why Draco got pregnant and it was good explanation. i'm glad Severus is so helpful. Good to see him so caring.
person Jan
schedule March 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What's going to happen to Harry now? Will Severus or Draco or whomever notice that there is something wrong with Harry?

Please update chapter 12 soon ^_^

Jan
person Ice Prince
schedule March 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very beautiful story and very sad. I like the plot, many exciting and unusual details and they make this story look special. Thank you for letting Severus live. Can't wait for the next chapter so please update.
person thrnbrooke
schedule March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
if only luna would tell someone about harry!!!!! i sooooo need chapter 12!!!
person vetigo_74
schedule March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What are Wrackwputs?, could it be that Moon saw the baby and how she knew Draco is Harry?? and if I think the beginning of the chapter is Giny in love and war anything goes.
schedule March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is such a beautiful story. Thanks so much for writing it. I'm glad Draco decided to finally confide in Severus. His godfather's a great help. And I hope that what Ginny (I presume that's who it was in the beginning) did to Harry is reversible....
person LUXOR
schedule March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I simply enjoy the way you see Draco!
many people portray him to forgiving, friendly and oh so good when he is in love or pregnant but you don't. And that's what I like about your story.
He refused to befriend harry's friends. When hes despaired he's furious and violent. And he tried to get rid of the baby. It's sad but it looks like him!
that's real DRACO as he should be!
I'm just in love with your story. Please update asap!! God I have found the best fan-fic with my favorite character!
schedule March 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Like always an amazing chapter! I must say your spelling has improved!! Kudos~~ Last chapter you made me cry, this story is so amazing, I am in love with it! And everyday connect just to see if there is a new chapter!! Hope you are feeling well! Take care~
P.S. I send you and email but don't know if you got it... Ciao~~
person Brandon
schedule March 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I knew something was done to Harry. I just hope people figure it out soon.