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is Harry finally going to break free from what ever Ginny did? How will Ron take the news of his manipulative sister? or is he in the plan to?? ^_^
cant wait for your next chapter

First of all, that was in no way short or boring!!! God, that whole entire chapter heartwrenching and nervewracking!!! During Harry's evaluation of why he's feeling the way he is, I kept hoping that he'd suddenly just snap out of what Ginny did to him and realize he supposed to be with Draco! That Draco is the one he really loves!!! I hope he's going to figure that out soon and BEFORE Draco has the baby. It would be nice if Harry could at least be there for part of it.

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awww poor Draco & Harry. Please let Harry find out what Ginny did to him soon! Holding my breath til next update

Finaly we see Harry going somewhere. But I hope when he finds out what Ginny did he wil put her in her place, how dare she be mad at him??? It's all her fault!!!! Great chao do need more!!!!!!<3

i had soooo hoped that severus would have figured it out!!!! siii need capter 16!!!!!

Actually, Harry's falling-apart is VERY interesting. I want to see both sides. My only criticism is that you need a beta with a better command of English. On the whole- awesome job! Keep writing!

I /love/ this story! The plot and your characterization is great, even though I'm not a particular fan of Braco being the submissive you've managed to make me a believer. ;D

My only complaint(and it's not really even that, just a suggestion) is about your word choice. I know you don't speak English natively, but perhaps try to find a beta who does to help you with your sentence structure and word choice? Sometimes you use words that are really too formal for the characters, or your structure is turned around. You could try going on the forums (there's a thread specifically for finding betas) or I'm sure one of your readers would be glad to beta for you(cough*me*cough* xD).

Either way I really hope you continue with the updates, this is one of my favorite stories and I'm really eager to see how it all turns out, I hope that Harry figures everything out before he goes mad!

Hehe! Draco is playing with fire and poor Sevvie is taking this all alone. I know what it's like. When my friend was pregnant her family was howling and going crazy because of her mood swings. And about Harry that was shocking. Damn Ginny! She's is killing him. I hope Harry is not going to end up in Azkaban :(((

God! I need more of this story. I love it. I can hardly wait for Draco to have his baby, and for Genny (is that how you spell her name? I don't pay attention.)to give it up! She dose not deserve Harry. I look forward to the next chapter. Much love. ~bye bye~

For starters do not have to thank for me is a pleasure to read your story two days ago I read the first chapter and began to mourn
I think people who write and make your readers will flow your feelings is because we transmit what they are feeling at that moment when he wrote in this chapter I began to think about how Harry is being destroyed because of Giny and she I do not really love or perhaps a poor sickly love Harry I'am happy that Draco not have to go to the Ministry that if it was torture for him and knowing that more could endanger your baby's
Congratulations.