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for The Downfall of Greed

by tcarlson

schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great. Love it. Please Keep writing and posting!
schedule February 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I hope to god you are going to continue with this story I can't wait till the next chapter! Well written and great potential! Keep writing, Hittichowa. :D
schedule February 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, how cruel to snape her wand like it was nothing more than a twig.

This is going to be mind and physical torture, isn't it?

Well, I like it so far. More please.
schedule February 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this gets better. The plot thickens.

Poor Bella, she never really gets to have ALL the fun that she wants. But what can you do, she always breaks her toys.

I look forward to Lucius' sweet torture!!!!!!
schedule February 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The premise sounds great!! Please break down everything into GRAPHIC details!!!!!!!!!

Please continue, I await with bated breath.
schedule February 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good start. I`m looking forward to more.
schedule February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm Intrigued please post more Xx