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for The Downfall of Greed

by tcarlson

schedule March 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love that the Dark Lord has made Lucius 'corrupt his morales'...ROFL!!!!

But I must admit, it does sound like things will get very HOT and STEAMY, with lots of D/s and punishment going on. I can't wait!!!

More, please!
schedule March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*shudders*
schedule March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
thank you for posting regularly!
schedule March 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very good story... I like the Lucius thought angle...
schedule March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a major fucker. Ugh I hope he gets some bad karma coming back at him!
schedule March 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
keep posting!
schedule March 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Malfoy is a real fucker. He is certainly doing his job for the dark lord, isn't he? I hope, for Granger's sake, she listens up and stops being so damn insubordinate!
schedule March 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Lucius, he so thinks he will win this power of will. He is so dillusional at this moment.

More please!!
schedule March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful plot. Please continue
schedule March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hermoine is stubborn and Lucius will learn who is really in control.

This is a very good story. Please continue.