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for The Downfall of Greed

by tcarlson

schedule May 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Lucius is in too deep now. He has no way out; not that I see him wanting out anytime soon.

This is going to end badly for Lucis. I can see it coming.

More please!!!
schedule April 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is just freaking awesome and totally so much more in character with what could happen than the fluffy bunnies in so many other fics. Cna't wait to read the next installment!
schedule April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a dark chapter. I knew there had to be some comming.

I enjoyed, Lucius' anger at having the Dark Lord touch Hermoine. He is in WAY over his head!!

I did like that Draco did not want to stay for the further desecration of the dead bodies. He at least has his limits.
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!!

I think Lucius is falling for Hermoine as much as she is for him. But will the Dark Lord put an end to their 'play time'?

The plot thickens!?!?!?!?!?
schedule April 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG, the screaming at the end was absolutely PRICELESS!!!!!!!!!

I love how Lucius, now wants to possess her. This is the start of his downfall.

By the way, why was the last time Lucius kissed anyone was when Draco was born? What is the deal there?

More, please!
schedule April 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Hermione is such a 'back talker'; I suspect that she will get punished for this more than anything else.

I cannot wait to see what Hermoine is dreaming of!?!?!?! Maybe a few dirty dreams of herself and Lucius (maybe with Draco and/or Snape); that would be just too lovely!!

More, please!
schedule April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
How can I get my hands on some of that potion?!?!?!?

I loved the line about the 'humourus gift'...that was priceless!

Please continue, I can't wait to see what Lucius will do next.
schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The bit about sending the stained sheets to the Dark Lord was...priceless!!!

Now that they have gotten rid of 'that pesky virginity'; I hope that Lucius will show her how to be truely submissive.

More, please.
schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It must be very humiliating to enjoy the product of rape and be slapped in the face with such cold words in the aftermath, simply "being prepared for the Dark Lord" like she is some Mudblood Filet Mignon. Poor Hermione.
schedule March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, the image of being a virgin with a VERY experianced Lucius, is almost TOO MUCH!!!!

I am so hoping that Hermoine does struggle some; then Lucius can punish her (just a little).

More, please.