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for The Downfall of Greed

by tcarlson

schedule July 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully done!!!!! Thank you so much! Poor Lucius! Soooooo tortured! I can't wait to read more! You are truly a gifted writer and I am sooooooo thankful that you share with us!

Luciussmistress
schedule July 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhh please oh please I'm begging with my knees in the dirt! Please update soon! I am totally addicted!! I read A LOT of lumione stories and have NEVER reviewed because I figured it doesn't really make a difference, but if there's even a chance you read this and post another chapter it makes it completely worth it! I love your technique and verbiage, this story is beautifully created and amazingly well thought out! Its turned me into an utter junkie and I LOVE it! Please please update soon!!! You're awesome :D

Luciussmistress
schedule July 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just stared reading this story and I read through all 25 chapters in less than a few hours (with very few interruptions). The chapters weren't extremely long and it caught my attention from the beginning. I was clicking through the chapters so fast. Very interesting story. I love it..... I am anxious to see how Hermione and Lucius will end up.... please keep posting. :)
schedule June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Now would be a really good time for Hermoine to do wandless magic; or maybe the Order to come the the rescue.

But perhaps not.

I somberly await your next chapter.
schedule June 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you DID NOT just leave us on the edge of that cliff!?!?!?!?!

You are a truely evil and wicked author *smirk*

Please, please, please...don't leave us hanging like this!!!!!!
person mageemi
schedule June 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeep! What an evil Cliffie! Who's coming through that door? I want to hope it's the order, that would make a great alibi for Lucius with Voldy, to be able to honestly say that the Order raided his house and took him and Hermione away. But somehow I am very scared that its You-know-who!
schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
How can Hermoine tell Lucius that he will never have her again?!?!?!? She knows and has said that she loves him.

But I guess the moment of truth is upon Lucius now. What will he do?

Please post soon.
schedule May 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, is Lucius really going to give Hermoine over to the Dark Lord?!?!?!?!?!?!

I do, but I don't want the next chapter. Is that weird or what?
schedule May 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
She came back, just to be with him!?!?!?!?

How will he face her the next morning. Or even better, the next night, when he must give her over to the Dark Lord?

The plot thickens and definately peaks the curiousity.
schedule May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, no...is Lucius falling in "love"?!?!?!?!

What will he do when the Dark Lord wants his Mudblood? The plot thickens.

More, please!