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I'm not going to read this all now, but the way you wrote Lucius and Bellatrix is excellent and very humorous

Absolutely brilliant loved how u kept lucius personality as well as severus

That was excellent, I was impressed! Normally, I lose interest a chapter or two in, but not this time. Well done.

THIS IS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL STORY I HAVE EVER READ....im not joking its so touching and just beautiful i cant give u 5 starz cuz nothing is perfect but my god u gave me a tast of a masterpiece i love the tension the lve the want the everything every other story i read its either sex sex sex or pain or just everything seperate but u took everything i loved and put it together im so glad i accidentily found this.....ITS ABSOULITLY BEAUTIFUL AND I will read it again until i cant stand it .....it took u months to make this wonderful love story and me only around 10 houres give or take a few houres to read it.....the best hours of my life well spent......i say YOU MUST LIVE ON AND WRITEE WROTE WRITE WRITE!!!!!! when u make another fic. keep the feelings there but with different charactores!!!!!!!!!

Bravo, excellent story.But still would have liked to see at least 'some' regret over having killed the muggle girl and a little more anger on hermione's part but it just comes off as he broke her and sh'e suffering from a sever case of stockholme syndome and is just confusing that for love, so unless it got retconned mid-story i just dont see the order going "oh well you switched sides when it suited you and did a shitload of bad things that you feel no regret whatsoever in doing but ya sexed hermione up to the point where she gives up a chance at freedom to be with you so you must be a pretty decent guy underneath it all, heres your full pardon". but still overall, good story.

I was pleasantly surprised by this story. I am not a Lucius/Hermione shipper and I read this on a whim. I don't like rapefics, but I was quite curious about this tale. I must say that it was completely different from how I thought it would be. It's an easy read and I very much enjoyed the tale.

Thanks for sharing!

One of the main reasons I became a member of AFF was to let you know how much I appreciate this story.
I've always been quite a big fan of Lucius and his transition from a heartless torturous bastard to an awkwardly caring man is really really well written, not abrupt at all like it is with most stories nowadays.

Amazing job, and I really look forward to the final chapter! :)

I'm confused. Why didn't Draco or Lucius take the polyjuice to become someone else? If the DNA does not change, it would not have affected that and they could have walked right in and out again. And Harry could have used some and gone with him as someone else also. Interesting...I love Harry. p

VERY nice fic, im totally hooked at this point.The one small complaint i have is that hermione just seems to have completely forgot that her 'only reason to live' killed her innocent muggle friend right in front of her and harry and a few other characters seem to think its perfectly okay that hermione and lucius be together because he makes her happy disregarding the fact that he essentially broke her. but all in all good story, just waiting to see if lucius is going to have any serious bad karma heading his way for what he has done,please continue.

Damn but I hope you're still updating this story. I haven't fallen this hard for a fanfic for about six years. I'm generally not a big fan of rape victims falling for their captors, but damnit you've convinced me just this once. Also, Goblin Banking and Serverus inventing his own potions, frickin' hilarious. Serious congratulations on this story and, once more, I desperately hope you're going to update soon.