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for Would That I Could Have My Dreams...

by MikaLero

schedule November 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very beautifully written. Rowena and Salazar really are the perfect complement to each other, despite the many fanfics and fanart depicting that Rowena and Godric belonged. I was curious though, in the wedding, who's was it? Salazar to Helga? That was my impression but it was cryptic, which served a point, but a small bit of clarification would have been nice. I really enjoy how you didn't craft Salazar to be a comic book villain, but gave him very Slytherin qualities that still painted a portrait of a real man. Rowena is also very femininely cold and aloof, as well she should be. Excellent vocabulary as well. I thoroughly enjoyed this.