rate_review Reviews

Oh! I love it! I love it!! I wonder how long it takes for Voldie to get all his horcruxes back? Harry and swords is going to be AWESOME! Voldie's in trouble!!! Update soon!

Forgot to put this in with the other review, but I really hope Dumbledore is in hell, too. Not a big fan of him.

wow, really interesting story. I never saw something like this...Toby is cool. Really great how Harry mistook him for a monster and then he is just...well, whatever the hell he is. -excuse the pun-

You know, I'm not really a fan of adultfanfiction for a couple of reasons, so I hardly ever read something here. Do you know if there is any way to put a story on alert so I'll know if there are new chapters for this story?? I wonder if I'll be able to find it after a few weeks myself. Will this be a Harry/Voldemort by the way?? -if so, why'd you put it under Male/Male and not simply Harry/Voldemort? Sorry if I'm being nosy...just curious :P

anyways, good luck with writing the next chapter! I look forward to it!
xx elfin

even demons have a momma to box their ears lol great job on this so far, can't wait to read more :)

Well now this is definitely an interesting story you've created, I don't think I ever would have thought of Harry going to hell, but I suppose the diablus's explanation makes sense. I'm curious though, she said everyone heals and has a fresh start in hell, but what if a person was genuinely sadistic and cruel in life with no input from madness or whatever? I guess we'll find out if Voldemort stays evil though what happens, looking forward to more!

Very intriguing. I look forward to more.

This is absolutely brilliant. The creativity and the pure imagination that went into this caught my attention right from the start and the way that you write has me picturing Harry and Voldemort in the desert wasteland that you're portraying at the outer ring of Hell. The demon sounds hideous and I hope that Harry isn't hurt too badly.
For some strange reason I found the way Harry was hooked under the flesh by the demon's claws very similar to a scene in the film the Texas Chainsaw Massacre, but that might just be me trying to make a comparison that isn't there because of the similarities. I can't find it in me to care too much about Voldemort being partly eaten by the demon, though he'll redeem himself slightly if he gets up and saves Harry.
Anyway, a brilliant start to a truly original story, I'm so glad you wrote and shared this, it's put me in a writing mood when I was all set to sit around and read all day.

StarLight Mass. X

Please write more!

Oh wow, excellent start! Very enthralling from the get-go!

very nice start, interested in seeing where you go with this :)