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for World in Pieces

by Lomonaaeren

person Sarah
schedule February 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
omg Ive been too preoccupied with sleepless! such a good star to this plot. love it please update soon!

person Cookies_B
schedule February 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i really like the concept of this story!!! it's so interesting that everyone is different but dumbledore (lol he's still sneaky and keeping things to himself) i wonder what the relationship between ron, hermione and harry be like =O what was their relation with their harry like? can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule February 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! new Loma story. *settles in to watch and read.
No sex or romance this time out? Thats new.
*awaits further developments with interest.
person kit
schedule February 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh! I like this new story a lot. I can actually feel harry's awkwardness and resentment to his situation. To be forced into another world where you must destroy voldemort again, when others have already failed, and if you succeed there is no promise that you'll find your way back home.
Though it seems like harry might be on to something about it being strange that Potter(1) killed himself. Was it a murder from within the order of the phoenix?
I'm interested in hearing about how much more different this alternate universe is to harry's original one. Were remus and tonks killed off in this version? I'll just have to wait and see.
Hopefully harry will find a way to get back to his own universe. if he does....would it be possible that he returns after years have passed since he killed his Voldemort?
I'm excited for the next chapter! :]
person puresilver
schedule February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm completely in love with this new WIP you've started. Even if it doesn't end up being a romance---ish fic. This is such a unique plot twist. I can't wait for more. Good luck!