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for World in Pieces

by Lomonaaeren

schedule August 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, harry really ripped into them... not that they didnt deserve it. maybe sev will be able to free himself from dumbles in the end. i hope so as he's a self seving, minorly megamanical prick. at any rate, it'll be interesting to see their next move...and voldi's.
person helewisetran
schedule July 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
another wonderfully done chapter. I love all the action. Your description of Harry Potter is very true. He doesn't believe he can destroy Voldermort, nor does he try to. He only try to survive, and in doing so...destroy Voldie. I wish Harry would reconsider the damsel in distress name Draco though. Lol
person Kyandoru
schedule July 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hooray! Go Harry show 'em what you got! I love it when Harry does something no one else expects. I hope you give detailed descriptions of their faces next chapter. Thanks for the update!
person sarah
schedule July 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
you seriously do not update this story enough. But anyway, awesome chapter, like freakishly awesome. Oh and a great job on the other stories. keepp being lazy about reviewing but count this review as about !0 for each story your in the process of writing.
person heartstar
schedule July 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story know you have a lot going on but when you can please update. Everystory of your I have read I love. keep up the good work.
person Zip
schedule July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YES, I like this story, I can t wait for another chapter. I am kind of surprised,that you don t have more reviews...ect. for Word in Pieces. I can t determine what to think about Snape, Dumbledore, Sirius, Ron, Hermione..., and surprisingly I enjoy that pretty much. It s refreshing. I like using magic, fighting, learning and whole active part. It s nicely balanced here- psychology of not believing anyone and action. To tell truth, I didn t like your concept of destroying spells and magic in Intoxicate in Sun (sorry, my personal preference, so I kind of stopped on 10th chapter). I take this one like reverse to that concept and I am trilled.
person Zip
schedule June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I wonder, if you will continue with this one. I kind of like it. Everyone can be your enemy and everything is somehow different like you are used to it. Kind of interesting, because there is so much options (unexpectedness can be achieved quite easely with this setting and you worked that nicely from the start). Well, you have some knack for good settings. hmm, you said that you write originals. I just wonder, if they can be bought or read somewhere else, or you really just stack them at your computer.
person Kyandoru
schedule June 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
"Oh, Draco...." is all I can think of to say. He is just putting himself up for a lot of trouble. Hooray for more Harry/Snape interaction! Thanks for the update!
person helewisetran
schedule June 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is my fav fanfiction here. I love your original idea and the story development. Every chapter is so intense. Please update regularly.
schedule June 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
so, I'm thinking polyjuice, unless Draco got it wrong or Snapes lying. Then there really is a traitor in thr order. It'll be interesting to see the fall out of this.