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for World in Pieces

by Lomonaaeren

schedule October 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That'd make sense if voldi's easily raising the dead. a lot got explained in this chappie and I do feel sorry for Har. Very much te world against him. I hope he does manage to establish communications with his world. He's gonna need all the help he can get.
person Jettsetters
schedule September 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I feel like you hate this story, you never update it. I understand that you are more committed to your other works, but I hope you update this soon! Good luck to all your other stories!
person Zip
schedule September 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just wonder, did you drop this story? It s just too good to end unfinished :_(.
person Sarahe
schedule August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know I think this story is awesome and can't wait to read more of it. I know you said you won't be updating it on a schedule, but I'll be checking in to catch the next update!
person Zip
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes, another great chapter, really, this is my favorit story from your rich selection of HP. Espacially Harrys resistance against almost everything is somehow captivating, and also writen expresions, feelings and like did I already say action. It s really sweet fruit for me (ups, my grammar, sorry).
person helewisetran
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
you don't know how happy I was when I see chapter seven was up. I love the strong will and determination as well as complete confident in his belief against what everyone says in Harry. Another wonderfully long chapter. I would enjoy rereading it until your next post. Thanks

PS: I understand what you mean that a relationship with Draco is unhealthy. I was just a huge H/D fan, hard to get rid of the hope that they would get together.
person kit
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
excellent chapter update! I'm really curious to read about how the timeline in this world went.....it must be interesting, otherwise, why hide it from the wizard that can save your world?
Albus is pretty manipulative and ruthless. He's quite frustrating actually. Kind of bothers me that no one else sees it but Harry and Snape, but I guess people prefer to be ignorant rather then face the grim truth.
Hopefully Harry will be able to crack the code on the journal and get some insight into the other Harry's perspective of his life.
person heartstar
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hmm Inderstandable... I like where you are taking this... More please when you can..*S*
person Kyandoru
schedule August 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hooray! I was getting worried. I loved their reactions to Harry coming back. I also love that Snape and Harry are getting more interaction, they are just so interesting together. Is Draco ever going to end up with this Harry, or is he just too mentally unstable from grief?
schedule August 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well, that sucks balls. Not only stuck in a world where the war is nearly lost, but your 'allies' are mostly untrustworthy and your enemy a super powered version of himself. i doubt voldi will be underestimating harry so much anymore. Itss good snape is his ally cause the rest of em such balls.
does this dumbles have the rest of the hallows as well? will we eventually learn why their harry suicided?

ty for the update btw. been a while for this one.