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Great story as usual, Lomonaaeren :) It's refreshing to read a gen fic from you, although I do wish Snape would devellop some kind of affection/attachment to this hardened Harry he never dreamed of meeting.

Something's been bugging me though. It's about those prophecy boundaries, which are the reason why Voldemort couldn't be killed without having Harry do it. The prophecy says that neither can live while the other survives. I understand how the original Harry and Voldemort could be linked and closed off of the rest of the world in their conflict, but... Harry is dead. The prophecy is complete when one of the two dies. Since the prophecy is over now, why should there linger protective boundaries? Maybe those are reactivated when another Harry is summoned to this world, but what about in between the summonings? In turn, shouldn't Harry be invicible or at least protected from anyone but Voldemort? Those boundaries just strikes me as strange...

Now that I'm really thinking about it... wouldn't this world original Harry be protected by the same prophecy boundaries as Voldemort seem to be? If Harry didn't kill himself, how could anyone be able to kill him when those boundaries should protect him from anyone intervening with his final fate?

Ok ok, I'll stop this rambling now. Can't wait for another chapter ^^

When I saw this chapter up I immediately started repeating 'I'm so excited I'm so excited' to myself. I really love your writing style. The line 'like mint on his tongue' stood out... gave a crisp feel. Darn...I want to write more but I'm conking out... literally. I love this story and others you have written. Haven't read them all yet. I'm saving them like little jewels lol.

wow, that mental fight was most impressive.
It seems in this world the dear Headmaster is more dark that voldi is almost. at least voldi doesn't pretend nobility.
Hmmm, yes, i could see that. it might not seem it but molly weasley is quite a force in and of herself.
I can still hope for something dire to happen to dear albus in the future right. right? can't wait till he realises Har... and Snape, have slipped his leash.

I really liked this chapter. It was nice to see such a little reaction to Harry's past. There is a time and a place for everything and the time to do something about his past was when or just after it was happening. I am guessing, though, that Snape will not let it go after Tom has been defeated. It is nice to see Harry trusting Snape a bit more. Thanks for the update!

How did Voldemort get through!?! I thought they didn't do the connection thing? That was very well done and creepy with the eye thing though. I'm really glad Harry told Snape about how he grew up. I like hearing Snape's thoughts on Harry's personality a lot. He is very good at taking in Harry's behavior and what he says and figuring Harry out. Very interesting to read.

Is it wrong to like the fact that Snape thinks Harry could be dangerous and Dumbledore might think he could be a potential Dark Lord? Makes Harry seems pretty badass actually... I like it lol

ahhhh... someone was polyjuiced to look like Snape... there was no argument and it was to push Harry to get angry and want to spend some time alone... soooo he could be murdered... right? right? chap 5 down and more to go!!! :)

Chap 6 OH MY GOSH!!! I loved that battle scene! I got so stressed when Harry was snatched by Voldemort... and then Snape wanting to have a fit to get him back... and fighting Voldemort... THE WHOLE THING!!!

A lot of times battle scenes are too short, or too bland with the details... but you are REALLY awesome at creating the tension needed for a scene like that... aw-SOME!

And thank you soooooo much for not ending that chapter with him still stuck with Voldemort.

oh my gosh!!! Just read chapter 2 and this is so good!!!!!!!!! Love love love love this!!!

don't wanna go to work don't wanna go to work... I wanna stay home and read!!!!!!!!!!!!! that second chapter was just as awesome. And I have about 5 more hours of work to do AFTER work... and little ones... and... arrrgggg!!!!!