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oh wow... I'm blaming it on my little phone.... when you said "what do you think? Is it a masterpiece?" I thought that was the start of your author's note and I was already planning on telling when I reviewed that yes this chapter (and the whole story) is a masterpiece! lol well, anyway... loved this chapter. I really liked how Severus bargained with Harry to get permission to return to his world with him... when he didn't have to bargain but just ask! lol. I'm so going to love love love seeing how people adjust to this Severus and how close he and Harry are when they only remember how much they couldn't stand each other :)

wishes is could smack dear al upside the head. moronicus much.
btw, for some reason i'm not getting the up dates. i'm going to log into google to see if that works.
wow, those are some seriously grandiose plans. i hope they can swing them.

Ch. 18

Ha! I knew it! Along with most of your readers, probably. :-) This is really getting exciting now. Can't wait 'til the next update.

no lie... I saw this chapter and both fists went up in the air with a 'yeah!' to go with it lol. I'm glad that Draco is going to start seeing that he shouldn't be treating other Harry's like they are interchangeable with the one he was in love with. Because they are not the same person and it actually makes it to where he doesn't grieve like he should and makes the memory of his Harry unimportant because he has a 'replacement' when his original Harry should always be most important.

And I so liked Harry's reaction when Snape returned :) They have a totally different relationship than either of them had with their own Snape and Harry and it's such a positive one that I love seeing it.

albus, you complete and utter arsehole. i wonder if he meant to kill their har or if he just screwed up and is now trying to cover the mistake his ego mania caused.
well, draco isn't cured but he's not mooning and dazed either. it's a start.
hmmm, they might not trust each other fully yet, golden and her crew and har's lot but they're off to a good start. that knowledge is definitely a key fact.

goodness, dumbles is shedding allies like nobodies business... that god complex is really doing him no favours at all.
i can understand how har would be a bit clingy. sev is his touch stone and mentor. all he has really in an almost completely hostile world.

Yeah!!! I feel like cheering whenever I see a chapter of this story. I adore Harry and Severus in this and I'm so excited that Severus wants to return with Harry. (More cheering) Maybe Minerva or Draco could hold the anchor. Love this!

smart thinking snape bringing sal in like that. dumbles really stabbed himself in the hand with this little effort. His God complex is truly overpowering. Delusions of grandeur much.
nice that har can work unsupervised. Har's gryff heavy approach seems to be working in this instance though.

Hallo, I didn t die, like being your fan. I just don t have free time, so this time I am sorry for my grammer, as well to be poor audience. However, I would like to ask you, if you will continue World in Pieces and Roses, Made by Hands. Maybe I check just like once in week or two, but I am still waiting :D. Oh, and Happy New Year, full of creativity and luck, health, love..... and free time :)

well, damn. Sev pretty much walked into that one. I wonder if har will get to see him again before the end of things. So, does put the kobosh on getting draco out? I hope the Weasleys can keep har on an even keel and not let his Gryff ness out do his slyth cunning.
heh, yeah, Percy is just so very anal and objectionable.
I hope har's plans to connect with the other rebel types come to fruition.