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for Only One Night

by tarrador

person colao
schedule February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying your story and no, your English does not suck. Please continue.
schedule February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i do not think its bad. there are actually only a few real problems with your writing. some parts are just not phrased correctly.
person Dazabeth
schedule February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, im not a native speaker either so i wouldnt know about grammar rules, but at least for me is 100% understandable and great :). Keep going!! Im dying to read the next chapter :).
schedule February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i love this story so so much
:)
keep writing :D