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I'm loving your story so far and can't wait to see how far you take it.

I really like it. Its looks like its going to be a really good story, especially since you already have it finished, its good that you know where you're going.
Don't worry about the language berrier, even when the wording is a little off, (at least I know that with me) it is pretty easy to see what you are saying. You got it down pretty good.
I'm excited to see what will happen next!!
Please update soon!

I'm enjoying this story, and while your English is not perfect, it's fine as far as the story goes :) You are only making small errors, so it doesn't detract from the story too much. I hope you keep going with it, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Your story is great!!!!
Your English is great as well, if you had not mentioned it I would not have known that you were not a native English speaker.
Please continue with your story, I look foward to reading the rest.

Oh, this is a wonderful story so far. I can't wait until Hermoine is "begging" Draco for more.

And will he 'fall' for the mudblood that he should hate or is it just physical?

Please, please, please continue!

I just found your story and I think you have a great hook, interesting premise. Every once and a while a word pops up that probably isn't what you think it is. That is a little jarring, and leaves some things in the dark, but I like what you have communicated so far.

What is it that they think Snape knows that will help the Order? Is it just for vengeance about Dumbledore, or is there something specific they need? I don't know that Hermione would consider the offer unless there is something very important to be gained.

Will Voldemort be able to break him out soon or has that prison break already happened? Are the dementors gone at this point? I sort of forget the state of the Wizarding world at this point. It was only a few months after Dumbledore's death that the Ministry of Magic was overtaken by death eaters, so is Hermione in more danger than Draco?

And I could help you with your word syntax if you truly were interested. If you don't have anyone to help you with your english (which is really good all things considered) I would do it.

I like this one a lot! I will be continuing to read any updates - though frankly, you should definitely seek out a beta to help you with some of your english! I'm not being rude with that comment, because otherwise it is a very well-written and interesting story, but I am somewhat taken out of the story when a word/sentence is a bit off. If I had the time I would beta for you myself!

continue, your english is better than some native speakers so dont worry about it too much.

it's a really good fanfic, you should continue :)

I thoroughly enjoy this story as it progresses and I'm very happy I can now review w/o logging in. Please write more soon! :)