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SarahWhitman's jaw --> on the floor :o whoa. That's a new form of cruel and unusual punishment!

I really do like the banter going back and forth. Especially, the line about the Daily Prophet story...that was priceless.

I think that Draco has indeed, let the 'hell cat' out of her cage. I think that they will both be hotly surprised by what Hermoine will do next. At least I hope, because the flame is definatly been turned up!!

As always, more...please!

I just sat down and read through all five chapters at once. This is amazing! I can't wait to read more. And I think that you're English is great. It sounds very proper.... very unlike the English I'm used to (I'm from America). Please update soon!

I love this story. Your doing great honey

Oh, what a torturous good time!!! Both for Hermoine and your avid readers.

Prolonging the sweet torture and bring us all to the bring over and over again *is it hot in here or is it just me?*

I hope that Draco (and our wonderful author) drags this out until the very break of dawn!!

I'm in love with this story. It just feels like a story that's true to the characters, which I believe is what lacks in over half of these hp stories. Thank you!

hi! Where can I read the German version of this story?

You are right, you are cruel and inhuman to leave your readers hanging like this!!! But, you also know that we will be back for the next chapter because of it. You are devilishly evil *wink*

Please do not leave us haning for long.

I love your story. Please continue to write. Don't feel disheartened about the lack of reviews---lately especially that's just the way people act on this site. Most of us read a story and move on to the next one then the next then the next. We're usually so caught up in feeding our own addictions, in maintaining our sex-crazed highs that we hardly ever pause long enough to become lucid enough to form valid commentary on authors' works. That's too much work... These days readers mostly keep their criticisms and/praise to themselves. Some do it because their busy or selfish...some do it because they don't think they have anything to say or that their opinion is worth anything. If getting reviews is really what your after maybe you could try entering your story in writing contests on other Draco/Hermione fanfiction sites? Otherwise...it might be helpful, at least for now, to try to pay more attention to the quality of the reviews that you receive on this site versus the quantity. Who knows....maybe when your story becomes a bit more developed---a few more chapters posted---you might see more reviews? Give it some time. (^-^)

Also, I wanted to point out that your not being a native speaker of English does not at all take away from your story. The level at which you write is spectacular. You speak or at least write English very well (and this may or may not be the result of your hardworking beta--I've yet to read any of your unbeta'd works) but I just wanted to add that you shouldn't lose yourself completely to conforming to how you think others want you to speak. Speak in your own way, clearly though, and we will understand. In other words... you don't have to worry about not being a native speaker of English. You think that you do not speak it well or write it well and that's ok...it's perfectly natural. But you don't have to blame your mistakes on being a nonnative speaker. You could say that you're simply not at the level of grammatical English that you wish you were. ( A lot of us native speakers use this excuse all the time) Besides, I've seen some pretty bad essays written by native speakers in English 1101. Your story doesn't even come close to sounding as "nonnative" as those essays did....just saying. Keep up the good work. Send my compliments to your beta as well. You guys make an awesome team.

I would have had no idea that English wasn't your first language if you wouldn't have said anything. I like this story a lot, and definately want you to continue it. <3