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for Into the Lion`s Den

by Koira

schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, please update soon!
schedule May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay, chapter 2 :) love the story so far, but hope you don't wait another 3 months before you update again. Looks fun and Yes i do believe you got Harry right with his attitude towards the Malfoys, (though i can see many people disagreeing with me)
schedule May 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well, damn. No reconciling of the previous generation huh... Maybe Gin needs to go to mind healer about that. can't be healthy holding on to all that angst and hate. so does this mean they're staying at school again?
person Althydia
schedule May 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, I look forward to seeing how Albus and Scorpius can overcome their families' prejudices. Also, I'd like to know why Scorpius doesn't go home for Christmas. Does he not get along with his family? Because it could work in his favour with Albus's parents.
Also, I thought Harry's and Ginny's reactions to the news were how I expected them to be from the books, although I don't agree with Harry's last words to Albus: in the end of book 6 and in book 7 it's made obvious that Harry has more sympathy for Draco and knows that he's different than his father. In the dreaded Epilogue he nods to Draco at the station and even tells Albus (whose second name is Severus) that he won't mind if he's in Slytherin. What do you think?
But it's nice that James is supportive here because in fanfictions sometimes people tend to make him more of a bully with his more sensitive little brother. :)
schedule April 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like the start of this story! James is awesome and I can't wait to read more:)
person MinervaEvenstar
schedule March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a great beginning; the relationship between the brothers is portrayed very well. I hope to read more soon!
person Jan
schedule February 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting... I can't wait to see how this story is going to turn out, please update chapter 2 soon ^_^

Jan