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Hey - I really like this story and how it's going. Were you planning on continuing it?

I really like this story - really would like to updates to this! I want to meet Scorpius and see the family reaction to him.

Really like this story - can't wait to read the rest? Is there a pov from Scorpius?

Wow! It's a rare treat, me leaving a review (I'm bad that way), but this is such a beautiful piece of fiction that I had to stop for a short message.
The way you write the interaction between James and Al, the way you portray Harry and Ginny's married life, it's just too perfect! I'm very much looking forward to your update.
Do you have a mailing list, or is this story by any chance also posted on another website that has a story alert function? I'd hate to miss any of it!

You're a really, really talented writer. Keep it up!

Aww, I'm glad Albus finally got his way - and that James and Harry stood up for him. There's still probably going to be some trouble over Albus being gay and wanting to live with his boyfriend, but at least they have a chance to spend Christmas together now. I wonder how Scorpius's family is going to react, though. Will we get a chapter from Scorpius's perspective to see what happens with his family? And if there's trouble about the gay issue, maybe Albus could get help from Hermione? With her strong beliefs in equal rights for all, I'm sure she would include homosexual rights in her list of things to defend... wouldn't she? Also, if there's a problem about gay people in the wizarding world because of children, shouldn't someone remind them that there are other possibilities, like adoption or surrogate mothers (particularly for purebloods who want heirs)? Maybe Harry should use his Saviour status to take a strong stance in this? I've always seen him as someone with a strong sense of justice and of doing the right thing...
... Oops, I think I'm advancing too quickly. Anyway, I hope Christmas goes well, and thanks for sharing!

fanfiction needs more good as/s! Ginny was pissing me off. I'm glad she changed her mind. I hope she doesn't do anything to hurt Scorpius' feelings while he's there. Course it would make for a good story....;) And I really can't wait for their reaction to Albus' and Scorpius' real relationship! Oooo it should be good!

winces... well, they weathered that okay. Coming out though... um, yeah, that's REALLY gonna hurt. I commend the boys on their control though. Most couples sneaking around get complacent and get caught.

I like it.

Great start to what i hope will be an amazing fic. Looking forward to where this is going. Keep up the good work!

i love the plot, the start is soo good, but ur loosing readers if u don't update once a week or at least one time in 2 weeks...
it's the 5th time i'm checking this story for an update, and i'm loosing interess...