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for Water Hemlock

by EmeraldFalcon

person noxlumen
schedule April 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, but I wonder why you used water hemlock as the title rather then hemlock since I think only the poison hemlock has a toxic fragrance and the symptoms look more like that one as well. Then again, it's the wizarding world, elves, and the middle of winter, so no hemlock would be blooming in RL during this story but it can work in the realm of fiction and it didn't hurt my reading enjoyment.
person Mary
schedule September 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Really nice and very thought out I love it!
person Onyx
schedule March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I didn't like this as much as your other two... I'm not sure why... it seemed more rushed, I guess. It was still good though. I just adore your writings.