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schedule April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like a great beginning... hope you continue... K
schedule February 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, first chapter and you already got me hooked! make this good, it's got a lot of potential.
yeah, there are a few mistakes. would you like me as your beta? (gotta warn you though, english is not my native language). i'd feel honoured!
till next time
schedule February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good beginning! What happend to the first child? Will they be able to save it if it is alive? Does Harry even know who he is? Don't keep us in suspense!
schedule February 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
poor harry as baby still with vodly do hope they return his child and the one that his caring want more soon please
schedule February 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting, I'm waiting for the next chapter. Thanks for sharing your story.
person Dhalim
schedule February 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't normally like mpreg fics, but this one looks promising ^^ Ill be looking for an update
person Elvira
schedule February 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!!!