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this story is so good!!
its sad that harry has suffered so much!!
hope u update really soon!!

amazing.

Hey I like your story. I'm normally one of those readers who are to lazy to review but I had a little spare time.
Hope you will continue soon .

Awesome story, can't wait to see more. :3
Update soon, please?

I liked the story very much, you have a very nice writing style and you pay attention to things that many other writers seem to forget (like spelling and grammar). I like the plot so far and find it quite original, even though there've been probably thousands of similiar fics written. Their main ingredient is Narcissa bashing, which I think is quite undeserved, so it's good to see that you've taken a diffrent approach. Also I hope you won't be changing the relationship between Draco and Lucius, so no threesomes, I don't really mind them, but I think that most authors don't explain them at all, one minute they are father and son and the next they fuck like rabbits and throw Narcissa out of the house, because , well actually for no reason at all.
I'd like to know how it will all turn out, how you will incorporate Harry into Malfoys' lives or maybe his apperance will cause a small revolution and everything will change for them?
Also I remember, that there was a small inconsistency - you wrote that Lucius and Narcissa are confided to Malfoy Manor and Draco is allowed also to go to Hogwarts, but at the beginning Draco was with Snape at Spinner's End, which would be a breach of the sentence (wonder what they were doing there). But as far as I can remember, that was the only error in the whole story.
Hope you'll update soon.

I really like this story and I can't wait for the next chapter. I was wondering if you could email me when you update, pleeeeaaaasssseeee. I don't know if this review thing shows my email address so I'll leave it here. It is flaming_moondagger19872016@yahoo.com. I know it's long but I don't have to worry about someone else having one like it.

Amazing!! love it please update soon :)

I'm really enjoying this story. I don't mind the length. You do what you can. Not everyone can write a novel at the drop of a hat. :) I'm looking forward to more Harry/Draco. Are you going to have them room together since they have this bond? Perhaps have Harry sorted into his proper House. Hermonies and Ron's reaction should be VERY interesting. I don't think Ron will react very well to the situation, then again if he knows about "breeders" he may be more understanding and Hermonie will be the one all out of sorts with Harry being with two men, and Malfoy's at that!! One thing I don't like about AFF is it lacks the update feature that FFN has. Do you have a list you send out? I'd love to be able to keep track of the story better. Thanks for sharing your story with the rest of us.

That was intense...Poor Harry!<3 He just totally mind-fucked them with that short history...

Ok, just so you know, I love this story already. I can't wait for the next chapter...