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for Generans Purus (The Breeder)

by jujukitty

schedule January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like how this story is going, good job. Wondering what Narcissa will have to say? And what of Draco? Hope you can update soon, looking forward to more.
person dx
schedule January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this has been added to my favs. LOVE IT
person Tesgura
schedule January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, it seemed a bit rushed at first, but you seemed to pan out into something that seems like it should. I can't wait to read what Narcissa's reaction to all this is, since she's already provided Lucius with one heir and all.
schedule January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful start.
Would love it if you were to continue writing this story.
Please update soon.

SM
person tamikolee
schedule January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love,love,love,love,loved this chap. I can't wait to read another :D
person varjo
schedule January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, hot as hell and definitely better than the last one. I can hardly wait for more... One cannot help but wonder if the Malfoy men can really keep their hands off...
person freemaka
schedule January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like the start you have made. Very well written.
person orkchild
schedule January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
GOOD START. I look forward to the next chapter.
person Elvira
schedule January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ee! Loved it!!

Hahaha. Narcissa come in now? Ooooo!

Update soon!
schedule January 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh my god!!!!! You need to update this quickly!!! That was such a cliff hanger!!! Honestly, I hope Narcissa leaves. I don't really like the thought of her intruding on them even though technically Harry is the intruder. And the thing Lucius was forgetting, I'm guessing it was a contraceptive charm or something of the like?

~nekluvshp