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by Merciless

person cynaga
schedule June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! Delicious...
person cynaga
schedule June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 was so beautiful and sexy! I love this story!
person cynaga
schedule June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
[ch 3] Talk about having your cake and eating it too!
person cynaga
schedule June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Extremely well written characterizations - a pleasure to read for the emotional/relationships aspects as well as the lovely smut.
schedule May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Absolutley love the story, a little too bad that they went mental there at the end of chapter six, using their marvellous minds to cook up ideas from their most stupid part of their brains. I can somewhat understand their fear of exposing their heart to eachother, but then again, they were so much more fun when they freely explored eachother and allowed them selfes to feel and need without regrets.
person Lizski
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lovely! I can't wait to read more - this is fantastic!!!!
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love the intensity of this story, but your last chapter was sad. Poor Severus, he just needs to be loved so badly and so does Hermione by the sounds of it. I also can't believe how uptight the school rules are not to allow for relationships between staff members.
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love that "little story". So far everything has developled intriguingly and convincingly. Both are believeable and sex is hot. My only little worry is that misunderstandings and (quite understandable) fear to admit to anything more than "just exploring" gets out of hand.

Waiting patiently for next chapter :)
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I do love this story and hope that they find their way together soon. I almost wanted to cry for snape at the end. I will keep looking for an update, thanks for keeping up with this story.
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh such sweet torture for the both of them. And for your readers!!! You give us just enough to be nearly sated and then you leave us hanging.

Please continue this unconventional story!!!!!!