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March 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
n'arr
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February 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
good, you know there are a lot of harry and flue story,, i wish there was some flue and ron stories, if nothing else, some show they care about him, they could train him to be a great boyfried.
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September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
it couldnt handle it because english is the only language with contractions
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July 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i love a good oneshot
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February 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Fleur has always been the hottest girl to write, the sex scene was a bit short but not bad, hope you plan on continueing this.
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February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Cool story I hope to see more of it. There are so few good Harry/Fleur story's out there. What does n'arr
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February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
My, that was quite hot.
I like the way Harry's body was affected by Fleur's Veela allure even while his mind had regained his full sensibilities, giving him the ability to take charge of the situation. His attitude towards her mind trick was par for the course, too, and totally in character.
And, ah, yes, Fleur's 'little death' was just what she wanted. What a manipulator, but it's almost as if she has no control over that. I would have loved a longer version of this story, but its brevity made the premise work.
Good job!
I like the way Harry's body was affected by Fleur's Veela allure even while his mind had regained his full sensibilities, giving him the ability to take charge of the situation. His attitude towards her mind trick was par for the course, too, and totally in character.
And, ah, yes, Fleur's 'little death' was just what she wanted. What a manipulator, but it's almost as if she has no control over that. I would have loved a longer version of this story, but its brevity made the premise work.
Good job!
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February 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes I agree there are not many Harry Centred Fics on this site which is pretty irritating considering the book is harry centered anyways good job mate I totally enjoyed reading this Story.
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January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Would love to see some follow up appreciation. Mayhaps by her little sis?
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January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
you are no doubt my favorite Adultfanfiction writer. Just like before, you managed to write nicely about a pairing that is hardly recognized in this site. Thanks anyway and i wonder, will this be a oneshot or... will this began something more fruitful? I wonder.