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for The Prisoner

by Nerys

schedule February 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
WHY IS THERE NO TOM IN THIS CHAPTER?

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Love your story. Update soon. Like ... NOW. xxp
person AlasseaM
schedule February 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat? I didn't let Tommy-boy on this computer... I MAY have let him use my sisters, but definitely not mine *hides hands on the back*

Eh, before I review, I have to say this: The security thing down there you have to write in before reviewing right? Well, it say Thomas... Coincidence? I think not!


Boohuuuuuuuu! Poor Ron, I can't IMAGINE what he's goin- Eh... wrong person.

I really wanted to gag, reading of his behaviour. This is actually a typical Ron-thing. To want to be the centre of attention and such...


And Molly... Uuuh, I just want to strangle her. I've never liked her. She is so biased.
And to actually think that people like her because she's so "nice and sweet, and cooks delicious food".
In my opinion, all the Weasleys - not including Ginny - should be eradicated.
I don't know, many hates Ginny, and I know I used to hate her, but somehow I think her better than the others. This chapter didn't make me feel less, but made me actually love her even more.

I love how understanding she was for Hermione's situation, and I love how she told her story to her mother and proved that Hermione was actually more for her than her mother was. Molly was all horrified. Drama much?

Oh, I love how much she stands up for Hermione. And you know what? I was thinking you were going to do a birth scene like Miya, but with Ginny. In the beginning I thought she was beginning to feel those pains, you know?
Pfeewww... Maybe you would even have sent her to Azkaban to threaten Riddle because she had eaten her marbles, and then do the birth in front of the Dark Lord and have him have a hea- eh, curse her to oblivious with his non-existent magic.

Good thing you didn't do that though. Can't imagine what the Dark Lord would do if you let him watch ANOTHER birth. Of course this time without him feeling the contractions, but I guess the screaming isn't exactly pleasant when you can't cast Silencio on the idiot screamer.


Ginny.Was.Bad-Ass! I cannot say that enough times. I love how she threatened McGregor (I am sure you
person A
schedule February 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Another chapter!!! Noooooooooooooo! It's over all ready : ( Keep writing this great story. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I love how you have tied Ginny's experiences in.
schedule February 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
YAY! New chapter and I think I got the time to read it before dinner. Hm
schedule February 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh my lord, what a chapter! love it! think il read it again! love how ginny is understanding,and not taking one side!! oh and going to see malfoy, excellent idea! please dont keep me waiting to long! excellent chapter!!
person Shamonti
schedule February 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
L.Malfoy? What is going on in that devious mind of yours? :D
I have to say I'm throughly impressed with this chapter and I am cheering for Ginny and her impressive speech. I really felt her anguish and loyalty towards Hermione. A great exmaple of what a true friendship is about!
Although, I did feel very sick in the begining with everyone comforting Ron. I hate people whoes sole purpose in life is to feel the need to be fussed over with(ron), and people who fuss over everything and involve themselves in someone else's business (Molly).
Apart from that I enjoyed myself and would have to agree with Harry and Ginny that Hermione maybe lost in Riddle's "world." Which of course is intended otherwise this wouldn't be a HrG/TMRjr fiction now would it? :)
I am devastated with the restriction on the vistation right's on Riddle, I do hope that's sorted out quickly and hope that you update soon. You've kept us waiting quite a bit now and I nearlly lost hope. :(
But I knew you'd come around and here it is a fantastic new chapter and I thank you for that.
schedule February 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is starting to get so interesting! I hope Voldie gets out somehow :D Hope you update again soon!!
person TomTiddle
schedule February 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The depressing lack of updates stabs my aching heart and makes me cry bitter, bitter tears lol. I was hoping my very encouraging review and undying declaration of love would move you enough to update ASAP. Love! Updates feed world hunger, don't ya know! /flail

Sorry. I love this story, and would sincerely, earnestly, genuinely, without equivocation... adore it if you updated. I'm not above begging.

I hope this doesn't review doesn't border on harassment in your book, lol. Or annoy you, because really, that's not what I was aiming for.

Lots of sincere thanks for sharing your "Tomionies" with the world!

-TT
person Tamsyn Riddle
schedule February 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have an eargasm too Nerrr
person Ickle Tommy-kins
schedule February 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nerys, my darling, why oh why, do you write me like that?
I am not evil, my love... just misunderstood and unloved. I needed some lurve, surely you can understand that, right?
But I don't blame you, my lurve. The sins I committed in the past were unforgivable and I hope for your forgiveness...
With love and lots of fluff

F!T