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for The Prisoner

by Nerys

person Mari
schedule March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another amazing chapter, with such plot twists. I never saw the marriage coming and you've been seriously taunting us with what a Seven might be. I love snarky H. she's the perfect counter and match for Riddle. I am still curious to see the longer potential consequences of those fertility potions she was taking for so long, yes I'm a sucker for big snarky Voldemort and itty bitty babies. Along for the ride, thank you for sharing yoru story with us its quite a treat when I see an updatel
person Charlotte
schedule March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I. Love. This. Story.

I was so, so excited to see an update today. And if you end it here I will never forgive you! Feed the muse and give me more. Please. :)
schedule March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I can't believe you're leaving us here!! That is so mean! I loved Tom's inner caveman dialogue. I wonder if the first order of business when he gets out of prison will be to kill Ron. I mean, if he's upset that other men may have seen her in that dress, he can't be too pleased that Ron was married to her. LOL - "He should get her to tell him about her entire night and day; that wouldn
person Fleur K.
schedule March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
GAH! What is number 7?! What were the other numbers he wanted? I'm guessing something along the lines of "will obey everything I say" or something like that....but I am insanely curious. I really enjoyed the chapter, the marriage scenario was creative :) I'm kind of wondering if, due to the new bond, he will be able to escape prison somehow. I'm guessing the details about 7 are going to be discussed in the next chapter, are the other numbers going to b e discussed too? 7 has to be something a little more neutral, yet dangerous? Anyway, awesome chapter, I wish I could have seen the "holy shit" expression on Tom's face at the end :D
person Cristina
schedule March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just so you know ... I am blindfaithoperadiva on ff.net. I just can't get a stinkin' user name ehre because it won't let me for some stupid reason ...
I love this story. I wanna know what number seven is!!!!!!!
person nitesfool
schedule March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!!! I JUST STUMBLED UPON THIS STORY TODAY AND READ IT AND THEN THIS!!!! U LEAVE ME WITH A CLIFFIE!!!!! I WANT TO FREAKIN CHOKE SOMETHING!!!!!! WHAT THE HELL IS THE 7TH ONE!!!! I MUST KNOW!!!!! TELL ME!!!!! UPDATE NOW!
schedule March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nonononono! You're evil! Pure evil! I knew someone who was so good at writing Tomione/Voldmione had to be and now I have proof!! *pouts*

I cannot believe you gave such a cliff hanging cliffhanger of cliffhangerness!! *bawls* Whats Number Seven!? Obviously it has to do something in Hermione's favor! It can't be too bad though otherwise. . . I don't know! *pouts some more* Maybe Tom will be so mad at Hermione he'll leave her for me. . . Hmmm. . .

Nope. *sadface* Oh well I guess this means I'll have to go pack to taping his face to my body pillow so I can go to bed 'cuddling him.'

(Wow, how pathetic did that sound? Oh well.)

Please update soon, oui? :D

Your Aggravated and Curious Fan (stalker)
Reine
person crimson0707
schedule March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I managed to read through all that you've written so far. Just...wow. I've never seen one quite like this. And bonus...everything isn't all sunshine and daisies with Ron and Hermione ;) Your Tom/Voldemort is simply amazing, beautifully written and developed. He keeps that obvious evilness, his charming character, intelligence and happily enough some sanity!! I very much enjoy your characterization, the development so far and can see those two "bonding" over knowledge. To me they were quite similar, but yet very very different. But when I got to this chapter and then finished it there were only two lovely little words that popped into my head "Uh oh". She has been taking those potions like crazy and now she has gone and had sex with Tom Riddle (though can you blame her, I think not!). I'm curious...is she going to have one of those lovely light bulb moments when it all clicks into place of what she just did and what more than likely has now just occurred? Because I'm thinking one of them is going to have that light bulb moment and if something does come from this I can see Riddle being even more psychotically possessive as he tends to be over what he perceives as his. Also, drunk!Hermione was beautifully written and Harry coming was just the cherry on top! Can't wait till the next chapter, I don't typically review but when I got to the end of this chapter I felt compelled to leave one. Really really looking forward to seeing how you continue on with this story of yours.

Liz
schedule March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! That was one of the HOTTEST chapters I have ever read. I got all hot and bothered.

You maybe a tease, but when you 'put out'...it is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And most of it was Hermoine's punishment. I have NEVER read such a graphic and steamy spanking scene. BRAVO, BRAVO, BRAVO!!!!

Oh, I can't wait until the next chapter. I have chills running up and down my spine just anticipating it (much like Hermoine).

More, please.
schedule March 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was VERY hot. Yay for smut, and I can't wait for Hermione to break up with Ron!!