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for The Prisoner

by Nerys

person lauren
schedule May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i wish you would update this story! such a cliffhanger!!!
person Aria
schedule May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Updates?? I miss this story
person Anon
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG CLIFFHANGER!!! Freakin A this story is so good!!! I was so bummed that you're putting the Apprentice on hold until you finish this story but once I started reading I got tooootally hooked!! I'm a sub and masochist too so I absolutely love Hermione & Voldemort in this fic its soooo hot! Is she going to get pregnant?? Because Ron will know its not his now aahh! XD
schedule April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
How much longer? I mean, I check every day, absolutely sure there will be an update. And nothing. I know it's fun leaving us waiting after raising so many questions, but, good lord, have mercy :)
schedule March 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG, you MUST tell us (your hapless readers) exactly WHAT number Seven is?!?!?!?!?!?!?

I loved that Hermoine blew off all of Tom's ideas. Too bad about the one where she would be the dominate and he the submissive*OK, only minorly*

I wish you had a picture of the dress!

More, please.
person Elisa
schedule March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Now listen, my dear. Seven is a great, great number (right, my Lord?), BUT, eight is better. Shut up, Voldemort. (Green light, but I'm still alive. No, Nerys, I really am, but not because you can get away with such insolence, but because of my Horcrux. Seriously, I dreamed tonight of killing someone. Pray it's not you, MUHAHAHA. Sorry.)
Anyway, where was I? Oh yeah. I accidentally found you had a new story and guess what, all seven chapters in one go, my eyes are dying and so was I, but only from pleasure:) Really, you are amazing - but come, leave such a cliffie? Number seven, my ass:/ Me needs more. Pleeease. Please. Please. Mm, this scene where He almost strangles her... Reminds me of the one in Bittersweet. Oh my. Why isn't there a man like Voldemort for me? Why? Really. Makes me depressed;/

schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this chapter. It left me positively curious about 'number 7' thing. I'm pretty sure, though, it has something to do with Tom's overenthusiastic reaction.
I wonder, as well, how can Hermione guarantee what he will and will not do - that is, what made Madame Moirae's mind wheels spin, before she understood fully what Hermione ment.
And then, there is a question of what were the options Hermione declined, like 'Diluted Fairy-Wing Draught'.

Good one. Do update soon. :)
schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am so excited about the update. I check here about five times a day for one. I absolutely adore this story, I love Tom and I just have to know what Number Seven is before I go mad! Wonderfully written, wonderful suspense as well!
schedule March 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok, ok, looved. Now, what's a seven???
schedule March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yaaay, you updated :D Haha, poor Hermione, walking around in the forest wearing heals. Been there, done that...
I wasn't aware that three o'clock was the Witching Hour? The only thing I new was Midnight being Ghost hour. At least that is what we say here. Funny thing how those things came up. I heard a lecture on mentality history about just sleep and what people thought about sleep. Before electricity, people usually went to bed when the sun set and went up when it because light. Since night can be very long here up north, sometimes people was in bed for a longer time than they needed. Then they would wake up in the middle of the night and being somewhere between awake and asleep (you know, if you wake up in the middle of the night and can't fall back to sleep, but you are too tired to go up). But back then, they didn't have the whole stress over "I need to sleep eight hours per night" so instead it appears they had this whole... almost mediation-state for an hour or so where they could have sex or just think. However, things can be scary at night and thus the whole concept of ghosting-hour appeared... or at least that was something I read. I'm not sure I'm explaining it very well...
I like how you built up the tension from where Hermione groans about the name Madame Moirae (why did you choose that name, btw?) and until we find out what she actually does :P A lot of time to think up the most despicable thing ;)
Hehe, I'm wondering what sort of business Voldemort had had to do with Moirae before. Since I doubt he have been married before, I'm guessing something else down the road of Dark Arts? Perhaps that is not very important for the story...
I also like that Hermione is more worried about Harry's reaction to her marriage than Ron's. Mehe... it's very telling ^^
Mehe, yes, Hermione is indeed one sneaky witch... promising that Riddle won't come after Moirae but no saying one bit about not coming after her herself ;) Clever witch indeed!
I did tell you that you are SO EVIL for not saying what "seven" means. BAAAAAH. I wanna know, I wanna know, I wanna, wanna, wanna *throws tantrum*
Haha, Mistress Riddle... that will indeed take some getting used to ;) I wonder how people will react if they find out... hm....
The Manda- and who may that be? Someone of importance? Hmhm... curious ^^
"His wrath would be unimaginable in all its ruthlessness" If I didn't know better I'd say Riddle is one hell of a drama queen overacting :P unimaginable in all its ruthlessness, indeed... And thinking about himself in third person... *cough*drama-queen*cough*
"tight-fitting, tiny, itty-bitty dress," This really, really had me cracking up. Lovely, I can just see him goggling her... she must look delicious :)
MAHAHA! His reaction when he opens the box is too sweet. Stunned! MEHEHE! Voldemort is stunned! Now we just need to know what the hell number seven is. Go and write more! Shoo! Stop procrastinating by reading and answering my review :)
Loved the chapter :)