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for The Spy Game

by kstargal

person snowball
schedule February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
looks really interesting.
person Sam
schedule February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The "correct niche behaviour" line amused me greatly. I get the feeling their little... interlude in the niche isn't going to relieve much of the sexual tension between the two of them, I think it may actually make it worse. Even though she's tied to a chair and apparently black and blue, I'm still kind of suspicious of poor Camille. I can see her secretly being part of it all along. As for her bruises; if they can use a glamour charm to cover them, I can't see it being much more difficult to make them appear.

I'm always so excited to see you've updated and then I get to the end of the chapter and am sad that I have to wait for more. I can't wait for the next chapter... Update soon?
schedule February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely fantastic story! Love it! You paint their personalities so well and the sexual tension is absolutely delicious! Keep up the great work, I'm eager to read more!
schedule February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i like it so far. i cant wait to read the rest!! very well written. i hope there is a happy ending.
person Anon.
schedule February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was quite excited to see that this story was updated! I'm dying to know what secrets Draco is keeping from Hermione, and can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule February 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've just started reading this story, and I am very intrigued. I can't wait to see what you have planned for Draco and Hermione. It's quite ironic that Draco has to break into his own house!
person anon.
schedule February 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story has an awful lot of plot for a PWP, but I think I actually like it better than I would have had there been less plot. I love your story to bits! I've just read the three chapters and am dying to know what's going to happen next!

I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon?
schedule February 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very exciting adventure! Love it and can't wait to see what's next!
person evilcats
schedule February 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is so far one of the best stories I have read of this year. Great first chapter, the thriller/horror element was done so well, I even had slight chills. The sexual tension is wonderfully portrayed and I absolutely love your writing style. I wish I could give you more than 5!