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March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God! This is really good! Please write more i can't wait to see where it goes from here. Harry should get his kids back. it would be funny to see all of the peoples faces when they see the kids. snape should get his ass kicked to the curb with this. he knows better. grrrrrrrr evil snape. *cracking a whip*
Oh and harry should totally make his own side in the war. Light, Dark, Ministry (stupid followers of either side), and then Harry.
Loved the grandfather character. he should get a chance to get back in harry's good graces.
question: what about other characters? Luna longbottom twins charlie bill and such. are they all going to be bad or will some of them be on harry's side. if you mentioned this already then i am sorry for not paying attention.
Oh and harry should totally make his own side in the war. Light, Dark, Ministry (stupid followers of either side), and then Harry.
Loved the grandfather character. he should get a chance to get back in harry's good graces.
question: what about other characters? Luna longbottom twins charlie bill and such. are they all going to be bad or will some of them be on harry's side. if you mentioned this already then i am sorry for not paying attention.
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March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was laughing at the end lol "Get the hell away from my door!" Obviously Harry is approaching then end of his patience, can't wait for him to go off on someone :)
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March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please update chapter 18 soon.
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March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i love this story
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March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOL I forgot that Longbottom was the bad guy in this story. Sorry about that. well that answers that question about him. I am used to seeing longbottom as a good guy or at least a guy that is on harry's side. It is interesting to see him as a bad guy.
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March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great transition from the back story to the actual plot and drama! Maybe there's some hope for Hermoine, she seems to understand the seriousness of Harry's anger. Maybe one day, he can forgive her. Ron and Ginny though, pfft yeah right!
Keep up the great work!
Keep up the great work!
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March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Gods I love Dobby, Please update chapter 19 soon ^_^
Jan
Jan
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March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i love that dobby threw albus out that was cool and at least herimone using her head
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March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. I loved how Dobby seemed to take his own pleasure in sending Ginny and Albus into the Black Lake.
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March 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Excelent story so far!
Love it!
Dumbledore is the worst! He will want to jkill Harrys triplets once he learns of them!!
And what the hell will do Snape once he realise that the child he tortured give everything up to save the childrens of his beloved godson?
Will he ever be redeem? i mean, he is a jerk, but he loves deeply and forever... even if in a bit of a twisted way!
Draco will want to kill himself again once he learns he didnt only abandoned his lover but his children!
Wonder how will Harrys great grandparent react to all of that!
Hope to read more soon!
Love it!
Dumbledore is the worst! He will want to jkill Harrys triplets once he learns of them!!
And what the hell will do Snape once he realise that the child he tortured give everything up to save the childrens of his beloved godson?
Will he ever be redeem? i mean, he is a jerk, but he loves deeply and forever... even if in a bit of a twisted way!
Draco will want to kill himself again once he learns he didnt only abandoned his lover but his children!
Wonder how will Harrys great grandparent react to all of that!
Hope to read more soon!