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for A Traitors Heart

by inuren

schedule April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh beautifully written.
They say 'Revenge is a dish best served cold' and to be honest with you the way you have Harry getting his revenge is fun to read.
Would love it if Harry could get his children back before anyone found out about them and kept them hidden from everyone, Would also love it if Harry took on Dobby's family as his elfs.

Keep up the great work.

SM
schedule April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh now THAT was a bi*chslap!!!! Go Harry!!!!

Excellent work here, the wait for waorth it!
schedule April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love it and hope to see more.

please, put me on your update list, annabear74@gmail.com is my address. thank you!
schedule April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!! Congrats on doing such a GREAT job! :)
It's great but at the same time, awwww i hate Harry being evil! I mean, it's understandable after all he's been through but still! DARN!
It's still great though and you can take any approach you like. I just want Draco to find out about his kids and him to make up with Harry!
Hey, a girl can dream right?
Well, i will try to be patient until the next chapter of creative genius! :)
<3 Eli (Pronounced Ely)
schedule April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
that was so cute with the kitten wanting more
schedule April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
it's been a while but i still love this story and i can't wait to read more.
schedule April 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ok that was a awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww how cute... Now to the question at hand when is the pay-back going to start and what about Harry's kids?
schedule March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i like harrys grandfather i do hope he gets his file back but i also want him with his kids looking forward to more severus should tell draco about the rapes just to see how he takes it i do hope that harry gets his kids love it
schedule March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
and i like gyuchin review i agree that would so cool to see the might severus fall because harry was protecting dracos kids and if his still a ass kill him
schedule March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful.
Keep up the great work.
Please update soon.

SM