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for A Traitors Heart

by inuren

schedule April 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
is he going to get his babies?
schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
damn dumbledim needs a good pounding on and i wish the elemental bloke good luck. Its going to take a hell of a lot to get harry out of uber angst mode.
person rocmom01
schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story. I like you have captured the anguish and complicated nature of the events for these characters. Nice job.
schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just to let you know I always squeal with excitement when I see a new update from you! Great work here, I cannot wait for more of Harry's anger to burst forth and burn those who betrayed him!
person mjd
schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good something / someone else for Albus to worry about. I am curious about the children, their names should be in the book that tells what children can come to Hogwarts. Who's name would they be listed for? Malfoy or Potter? Or is the dear Dr. doing a secret blood adoption that would hide their identity?
person Anon
schedule April 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, it looks like Remus is kinda in Harry's corner. He needs someone to lean on, be human with once more.
Nice dialogue with the characters.
person vetigo_74
schedule April 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
In this story as I have moved the situation to Harry that he suffered and is suffering pain in the episode where their babies are born made ​​me mourn how hard it is for a mother to see that your child will never be as big pain for wanting to die and not if I was in hell.
I was hating Draco as possible because he has not defending his family I know that silence gives consent but I did not apply to Harry, I also think he lacked strength because they did their best to defend Harry when seconds and the pain could not be going to commit suicide is not perhaps the fact that we are human.
is the third story I read as I was moved realmete has made ​​him think about how good life has given me''if you fall and get up and still life goes on.''
schedule April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
u tell em Remi. Go stand with Harry. He needs you.
schedule April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
u tell em remi. I really, really hope harry will lwt remi stand with him. He needs someone
person Alicia Spinet
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well! i have only one thing to say! If a were Harry i woldn't, never, go back to Malfoy, after what he did! How could Malfoy doubt Harry like that! I couldn't go to someone that break mu trust like that. Never! You could alway put him with aonther, like, i don't konw an elemental?hint! hint! After all, you didn't put it in Harry/Draco pairing, so you could always change with whom Harry will ended up!