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for A Traitors Heart

by inuren

schedule May 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WHOA!!!! Lots happened here, totally blown away! Loved it all - glad to see Snape begging and Harry being impartial to it all!
schedule May 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like that harry told them what happen in prison. i also like to point out that i normally love severus and i can honestly say i would like it if severus finds harry's babies and i feel that severus and draco no longer need to suffer because they suffered enough but i still hope that everyone else pays legally and that albus should suffer more than anyone draco are ready lost his mum and dad and now raped to suck i can say that i want harry back with draco and severus as apart of the family as well as remus and harry's grandfather want more i do hope that severus finds harry kids for him want more
schedule May 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yummy a bodyguard want more dame save draco have draco are someone knew draco
schedule May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yeah draco's an ass but even he doesn't deserve what he's about to get.
schedule April 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
thats sad draco lost his parents i can see nev dieing but not the malfoys oh well i want harry with his kids and the light side to pay
schedule April 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Extremely hardcore here - though I have no pity for Draco at all. And I bet Harry won't either. Great work here!
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schedule April 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Be strong, Harry!!
schedule April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
so harry needs his children and maybe his grandfather can help get him away from albus and the all pay legally i do want harry with his family i can't wait to see what happens when they find out that albus stole james power and harry has kids nevil should die the gurades everyone should pay
schedule April 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great granddad is not going to be happy when it finds out about the children. Dum Dum better start running for the hill now or better yet throw him in the lake again. lol
schedule April 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope the GGGrandfather finds out about what Albus has done and what his plans were for Harry, and soon. when will Harry look for/find his babies?
I'm all into this story, thanks for writing, but I want more. Sorry, I know I'm greedy (shame,shame,shame) but we must except who we are... right!
You really have done a wonderful job, keep it up.