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for A Traitors Heart

by inuren

schedule May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved so far. Is very excellent work of hurt and pain but with the hope of the future.
schedule May 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i say severus should find harrys kids and harry should save draco want more i hope albus powers are truly gone want more
schedule May 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i think harry should take his kids severus and draco as well as remus and maybe tonks and go with his family trust me i want more love it update more
schedule May 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yes!!! he finally told someone about the kids about time!!... poor Draco I can understand Harry reasons but come on that is just heartless. I did like Snape begging that was a nice touch you don't see that very often.
schedule May 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
why does it seems that your going to put harry and draco back together? i don't like it! i will still read, but don't like it. i can't wait to read about his kids *squeal*. *frown* i know that dang doctor was going to cause problems, he better give harry back his kids. that baby theft.
schedule May 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i know i seem harsh but i am really big on betrayal and lying. i do wont draco to be in his kids life and i think harry should forgive him, just don't want them to date. be close friends yeah but not dating. i just don't see how they can trust each other after everything. i also hope that severus finds harry's kids because i don't think even he can come back after raping and torturing his godson. i do hope harry gets close to people and find love. but like i said there is just to much between he and draco but if you can make it work i'd love to read it.
schedule May 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh he finally told someone about his children. I wonder if he did actually find his true mate in Draco, I guess time can only tell.

I wonder who will find the children first, Harry, his grandfather and Rylan who only want to reunite the family. Dumbles who would most likely try and hold them as hostages to get Harry to work with the order. Severus who would most likely find them and return them to Harry in hopes that Harry will then save Draco. Mmmm i Can't wait to read more.

Please update soon.
schedule May 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Excellent work here! Dumbledore is getting his comeuppance! Can't wait for more!
schedule May 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
poor draco i feel sad for him
person Nubia
schedule May 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
In this chapter could not stop crying but also made ​​me think that what happened was horrible Harry is full of hate, I feel sorry for Draco in the previous chapter to see how Cain killed his parents and the Dark Lord was saying coldly that he would be its Amanat, and he thought he deserved it left me really shocked this story is strong and that is treason, hatred, vengaza a human being can feel.