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for A Traitors Heart

by inuren

schedule January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh poor harry i hope they find the really kilers and traitor i hope that harrys babies live and that he gets free and gets with someone else
schedule January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like it but you left harry with no one to count at all i hope that you allow harry to have and keep his babies apart of me hopes that draco didn't show up for court because his trying to help harry if not get harry with someone that would truly love him and that would protect him and his children as far as the rest i hope he only stay for a short time like the found out that harry was seening madam pompfey and that he was only becareful for the babies and if he does take draco back he makes them all pay want more i do hope you finish this story
schedule January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm guessing that the veritaserum would be bad for the babies. But why couldn't Harry swear on his magic that he didn't kill/betray the twins?