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for A Traitors Heart

by inuren

schedule October 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay you're back! Great update here, can't wait for more from you =)
person lacy grinnell
schedule October 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
please email me with updates to this story
person dominique1
schedule July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Jumping up and down i stop looking to see if you update at the end of june i was holding out for a month love it harry might have a mate i do hope that draco lives but lose harry and his kids that would be awesome punishment to know that you have kids but your not apart of there life.

I want albus to die and everyone else to suffer what happen to the guards i hope you haven't forgot able them
person Dacra
schedule July 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, I really love this story.
could you please just add a little more information in the sentences? suddenly, there's speaking someone I and didn't even know there was sombody else in the room -- it's a little bit confusion, most of the times
schedule July 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like Harry with Rylan I think he can help Harry heal. But I also hope there is someone for Draco too. I really hope every thing work out for them and there kids.
schedule July 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm of twwo minds on this one. While I can see where Harry is coming from with his 'vengence is mine' attitude i also agree that neither sev nor draco deserve the whole gang raped thing... but only because no one does. While I agree they do deserve punisment I hope there will be a point in which it is enough and they can be left to recover... though dumbles can go rot. May his name leave on in infamy along with toms.
the bond with Reylan looks hopeful, as does the potential tracking down of Harry[s kids, which is good cause he needs some hope. suicidal elemental = no fun for anyone and the wizarding world owes harry hard core anyway.
schedule July 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i hope he wont die and he'll find his babies. this is so deep.
person Jan
schedule July 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it please update chapter 30 soon ^_^

Jan
person dominique 1
schedule July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i think that ryalan would be good for harry and i hope that harry gets his kids i think that severus and draco should live and albus and voldy should die and that all the people that hurt harry should suffer and that harry should get his children back i hope that the doctor suffers a little to for breaking his promise his wife should suffer for wishing harry dead. want more
person dominique 1
schedule July 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
im of two minds i want draco and harry together and sev to live but i want everyone that hurt harry destroyed