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for A Traitors Heart

by inuren

person linda
schedule February 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
dislike the doctors wife a lot. she needs to die a painful death. Harry deserves to be with his babies. enjoying your story
schedule February 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't care how kill the healer and his wife, but give the babies back to Harry and soon. Please update.
schedule February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awwww poor harry and his babies. really want to know what happens next
schedule February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please give the babies back to Harry. Make the light side pay especially Draco and make Harry happy. Please update soon
schedule February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very nice work here, hope Harry recovers and goes on the warpath soon!
schedule February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for 2 new chapters within a day of each other.. cool.
I like this story, in this last chapter I wanted to hurt the wife cause of the line of letting harry die. I hate to see Harry hurting like this, when is he going to be proved innocence?
person Anon
schedule February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope Harry gets out of there eventually. I also think that the healers wife is horrid. Harry should have his children and I think I'd like to see her die if she tried to steal the children from Harry when he got out
person Anon
schedule February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I beg of you to put this on Fanfiction.net also. :)
schedule February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
GIVE HARRY BACK THE BABIES.

Don't let the doctor and Adele keep them, GIVE THEM BACK TO HARRY AND GET HIM OUT OF AZKABAN.

I'M BEGGING YOU.

Please update soon.
schedule February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Allanah-x kill the wife.